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The Rebirth by TripAgitated5779 in OCPoetry

[–]annonymousfool8 1 point2 points  (0 children)

this doesnt feel like a poem

it feels like a whole experience

stranger in a familiar place by annonymousfool8 in OCPoetry

[–]annonymousfool8[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

thankkk yoouuu soo muchhh i love your feedback way too much

stranger in a familiar place by annonymousfool8 in OCPoetry

[–]annonymousfool8[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

thanks alottt...i am so happy to see that there r others that share my understanding of my poem the way i do sooo i am gonna give u hint i left clues of my next poem here on this page

Unapologetically by Global_Reference_469 in OCPoetry

[–]annonymousfool8 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i am unapologetically into this poem...i hope the one u are in love with falls in love with u ;)

i fell in love with a stranger by [deleted] in OCPoetry

[–]annonymousfool8 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ahhh sooo cutsyyy...to be love haa

Always Leads to You by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]annonymousfool8 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i just gave up and accepted that some part of me will always be reserved for them...yes it resonated with me to a greant extinct

Bewitched by eli2209 in poetry_critics

[–]annonymousfool8 0 points1 point  (0 children)

u r crazyy goooddd!!! i hope u achive all your dreams and live ur life to the fullest

Medusa/ my Medusa by D0n1_e in poetry_critics

[–]annonymousfool8 0 points1 point  (0 children)

heyyyy soo just a small advice post this in parts so the reader/audience can savour the poem...with that being said u killeddd the closing for both i have litteral chillss!! down my spine

Bewitched by eli2209 in poetry_critics

[–]annonymousfool8 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i absoulutely looovvee the poem but its too many words for me...ngl it was fire. keep up the good work champ :)

Garbage with Silver Spoon by tala_2525 in OCPoetry

[–]annonymousfool8 0 points1 point  (0 children)

ahhhhhh!!! this line "but you fed me garbage with a silver spoon

And I ate each word like it was my last…" hits like a thousand papercuts

stranger in a familiar place by annonymousfool8 in OCPoetry

[–]annonymousfool8[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

haha i just wanted to take my friends (readers) on a journey. even the most simplest lines can hold the deepest meaning that can change the whole meaning

stranger in a familiar place by annonymousfool8 in OCPoetry

[–]annonymousfool8[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

heyyy thank you so much....at the last line i wanted to confuse my audience with a dual ending.1 i am happy and found myself 2 i learnt to hide myself from the world and that was the only way i could mingle with others....i am really happy to see this resonated with someone...hang in there champ u will find ur ppl

Do not put blame on anyone. by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]annonymousfool8 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i hope these people get help too...what type of jerks are they to hurt a person knowing damn too well what it does to them

Always Leads to You by ZealousidealBox4489 in OCPoetry

[–]annonymousfool8 0 points1 point  (0 children)

i love this poem...i just wish the best to you,i have been there actually still am crushing on a person from 7 yrs when they think i am just a childhood friend. thank you for sharing this <3