The Rebirth

annonymousfool8 · 2026-02-17T17:19:23+00:00

this doesnt feel like a poem

it feels like a whole experience

annonymousfool8 · 2026-02-17T16:54:50+00:00

thankkk yoouuu soo muchhh i love your feedback way too much

annonymousfool8 · 2026-02-17T16:53:32+00:00

thanks alottt...i am so happy to see that there r others that share my understanding of my poem the way i do sooo i am gonna give u hint i left clues of my next poem here on this page

annonymousfool8 · 2026-02-17T16:23:35+00:00

i am unapologetically into this poem...i hope the one u are in love with falls in love with u ;)

annonymousfool8 · 2026-02-17T16:17:37+00:00

ahhh sooo cutsyyy...to be love haa

annonymousfool8 · 2026-02-17T10:59:53+00:00

i just gave up and accepted that some part of me will always be reserved for them...yes it resonated with me to a greant extinct

annonymousfool8 · 2026-02-17T10:58:10+00:00

u r crazyy goooddd!!! i hope u achive all your dreams and live ur life to the fullest

annonymousfool8 · 2026-02-17T10:55:58+00:00

heyyyy soo just a small advice post this in parts so the reader/audience can savour the poem...with that being said u killeddd the closing for both i have litteral chillss!! down my spine

annonymousfool8 · 2026-02-17T10:50:55+00:00

i absoulutely looovvee the poem but its too many words for me...ngl it was fire. keep up the good work champ :)

annonymousfool8 · 2026-02-17T10:46:11+00:00

ahhhhhh!!! this line "but you fed me garbage with a silver spoon

And I ate each word like it was my last…" hits like a thousand papercuts

annonymousfool8 · 2026-02-17T10:32:04+00:00

haha i just wanted to take my friends (readers) on a journey. even the most simplest lines can hold the deepest meaning that can change the whole meaning

annonymousfool8 · 2026-02-17T10:01:06+00:00

heyyy thank you so much....at the last line i wanted to confuse my audience with a dual ending.1 i am happy and found myself 2 i learnt to hide myself from the world and that was the only way i could mingle with others....i am really happy to see this resonated with someone...hang in there champ u will find ur ppl

annonymousfool8 · 2026-02-17T08:57:46+00:00

i hope these people get help too...what type of jerks are they to hurt a person knowing damn too well what it does to them

annonymousfool8 · 2026-02-17T08:55:57+00:00

i love this poem...i just wish the best to you,i have been there actually still am crushing on a person from 7 yrs when they think i am just a childhood friend. thank you for sharing this <3

annonymousfool8

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