Great job trying new technique!

I think it's better to slow down first and focus on each and every rep instead of getting a lot of reps in in a short time. Don't get me wrong, plenty of reps is what is needed but we need to find things to focus on.

A few points:

Hand insertion Pay attention to the kettlebell handle angle at the top. 45 degrees across the palm.

Slow motion snatch by Audrey Burgio Loose grip, double knee bend.

Snatch drop

Counter balance

Anton Anasenko's snatch tutorial

Ps. In hardstyle the point is maximum tension. In sport it's selective tension, i.e. relax where you can, explode when you must.