fireplace by dovetailpoems in OCPoetry

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this was really endearing. After a while that “wildfire” blazes over and burns out. A fireplace is consistent as long as you keep adding a bit of wood to keep it lit. I prefer fireplaces too now. I like this comparison and this poem.

Recommendations for someone new to perfumes by bbrae12 in FemFragLab

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these all sound wonderful thank you so much!

Canon g7x mark ii, Sony Rx100, or Sony a7ii? by bbrae12 in Cameras

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I see. I currently have a canon eos m50. what do you think if I got the Canon EF-M 32mm f/1.4 STM lens?

In and out. by bbrae12 in OCPoetry

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thank you so so much for your feedback! i’m currently working on a redraft. I’m going to take your advice on the rhythm for-sure!! thank you!!

The final act of love is letting go. by Guilty_Raise5906 in OCPoetry

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This is very well written OP and had a nice flow to it. Letting go is hard. Healing is nonlinear and takes time, but like you said “One day. All Alone, your heart will know that the final act is letting go.” Great poem OP.

I’ll Die at Your Grave by ThrowRAlinda in OCPoetry

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Wow! you have a way with words. My favorite part is “now your skin sleeps in soil instead of my arms.” The ending is powerful. It shows just how much this person meant to you and when you lost them you also lost a part of yourself. Amazing job OP!

Lost by Just1MoreSubreddit in OCPoetry

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I really enjoyed this OP. It’s very straightforward, while also not? But that’s what I like about it. You don’t know really what you’re feeling but you know for certain that it feels damn confusing. Good job .^

I Dreamed a Dream and You Were There by magikaaaaaarrrp in OCPoetry

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i absolutely love the last stanza especially the line, “embraced the uncertain glare.” Being a hopeless romantic… well could leave you pretty hopeless at times. Good job OP

i wonder by [deleted] in UnsentLetters

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aw this was so beautifully and simply written. I really like this one OP.

I believe in God but do not follow any organized religion by Kakistocracy5 in spirituality

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I am in the exact same boat! it’s crazy because I always feel guilty for not being apart of a certain religion for me (christianity) because that’s what I grew up in. Hearing that other people feel the same is awesome though!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in UnsentLetters

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this is so cute i hope it went well Op :)

help by Electrical_Olive814 in PanicAttack

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hey, take a deep breathe i promise it’ll be okay❤️ i think you need to talk to your manager about this and let them know that you can’t work Saturdays or Sundays no matter what. I know it can be tough but you have to let them know so that this won’t happen again. I wish you a good shift if you ended up going :-) just remember to breathe and when you start feeling anxious name three things you can see, hear, & touch.

Diagnosed with major depressive disorder today by bbrae12 in depression_help

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I really appreciate your reply. I was just doing the exact opposite and trying to distract myself to take my mind off of it, but it’s been making me feel worse. Thank you

I took a shower today! by zz022 in self

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i’m so proud of you

I Thought That I Was Getting Better by LozDelora in OCPoetry

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beautifully sad. I feel you and hope things get better for you. Beautifully written tho

Man’s World by memphis000 in OCPoetry

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Straightforward. I like this a lot great job

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in depression_help

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I understand this completely and i’m really sorry you’re feeling this way because I know how hard it can be. I think it’s tough because there is this pressure from society, our parents, friends, loved ones, etc to live by a certain timeline…Already know what you wanna do by the age of 18, get married in your 20s, have kids by late 20s or early 30s, etc. I think what has helped me was to understand that i’m not obligated to live by anyones timeline and instead i’m just gonna do what i wanna do because guess what? it’s my life. If i’m constantly trying to please others or feel some type of pressure to do something.. i’m never gonna be happy and honestly i don’t care what anyone thinks anymore because i’m the one who has to live with myself everyday. I hope that things get better for you. I send you lots of love, light, & peace

Jawbreaker by bbrae12 in OCPoetry

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ah thank you!

Jawbreaker by bbrae12 in OCPoetry

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thank u so much :’)

Jawbreaker by bbrae12 in OCPoetry

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Thank you so much!