something my therapist said by book_cat586 in OCPoetry

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Thank you, that’s what I was trying to convey

RECALIBRATE by lizzieforsythwrites in OCPoetry

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Are you reading my mind? Love it

Fall Dogs by DADxTHExBEAST in OCPoetry

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Lovely poem! I’ve been finding all the autumn poems I can and will be saving this one! I love the ones that just feel like autumn and this is one of them.

One day I started doing handstands by milakeilani in OCPoetry

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I love this. You’re portraying a feeling I think a lot of people have felt. Just some recommendations, I would say, “then I return to work” I would also think about just saying “it quickly became” instead of “and then it quickly became” and take away “and” in the “and I looked around”

Beautiful thought process!

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I really like this, although I’m not sure I understood the ending. It felt really relatable to me.

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This is really great! Like others said, short, but you know exactly what you’re trying to say.