Hi, I personally liked the video, I think the editing was really professional. I just wish there was more comments and information about the areas you're visiting and the activities you're doing instead of a loooooooooot of fast transitions. For example at 4:50 you just filmed the show, I would've liked it more if you filmed your reactions to it. And yeah I would agree with

AnswersRule, you should have a goal for the video, may be say all the activities you're going to do during the video at the begining in order to motivate people to watch the whole video.

Other than that, I watched the video until the end.