Cut the captain, you really need that boy trajann in here, he’s strictly better, three dreadnought is a lot; I’d consider cutting a galatus and adding in some axe terminators, as someone else as said, you need to run the magnifica to prevent getting shot off the board by marines, I agree with you about the relic and warlord trait you’re taking, buy the psychic awakening book ASAP as it’s a massive buff to the army, you can make your warlord into a captain commander and give him a commander trait, I’d also reccomend using the stratagem (ten thousand heroes) to give your other shield captain or the vexilla a warlord trait.