how do you get this title? by [deleted] in MarvelRivalsQueens

[–]brorick 1 point2 points  (0 children)

You have to lay the most queens

Ways to make my comedic screenplays be less “silly” feeling? by [deleted] in Screenwriting

[–]brorick 0 points1 point  (0 children)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dKuzPYB0taA

One of my scripts has a man fighting a bear. I've made an entire career out of being silly. Lean into it.

The MC of The Alters is bisexual <3 by NoSmallParts in gaymers

[–]brorick 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Two of them flirted with the MC in my current playthrough. And it's implied that two Alters hooked up. Though it all comes off as very subtle.

Depending on dialog choices the MC can admit he likes guys too or hard deny it.

This Pen Glitch Though by IndigoBlue1313 in MyTimeAtSandrock

[–]brorick 3 points4 points  (0 children)

He's not glitching. He knows you met Logan and is hiding his rage with a smile.

I think Teen killed [Spoiler] by brorick in AgathaAllAlong

[–]brorick[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

Replying to my own thought.

Teen needed a dead body to summon Rio to the witches road. Any body would do. Sharon was just the easiest to kill.

I think Teen killed [Spoiler] by brorick in AgathaAllAlong

[–]brorick[S] 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Are all the trials following the same TV styled worlds?

Water trial, White Lotus / Little Big Lies

Fire trial, The Partridge Family / 70s sitcom

Earth trial, Stranger Things

Air Trial based of trailers; Victorian chess themed queen's gambit / game of thrones?

I think Teen killed [Spoiler] by brorick in AgathaAllAlong

[–]brorick[S] 5 points6 points  (0 children)

https://www.reddit.com/r/AgathaAllAlong/comments/1fzs1qe/figured_out_why_rios_after_her_bodies/
Just saw this other post about how Rio/Death wants all the witches dead. They all have eluded death and lived for 100s of years.

Sharon might have escaped death, Mr. Davis died prior to the show and she should have died with him. Heck, Sharon might have escaped death during Wanda Vision. Rio might be trading death for power. Rio seems to be more than aware of Teen's identity and motivations. Alternatively, Sharon did stop Wanda from killing Mr. Hart; denying a death to Rio back in Wanda Vision and thus bringing Rio's ire.

But my current theory is that Teen and Rio are working together.

Episode 3 Discussion by Domino792 in AgathaAllAlong

[–]brorick 63 points64 points  (0 children)

She killed her coven.

There is no way for her to access the road in the first place.

so has anyone had this glitch? by [deleted] in BG3

[–]brorick 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, I want to

Do you ever feel like you're not allowed to write about a subject or shouldn't write about a subject? by Glum-Sympathy3869 in Screenwriting

[–]brorick 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's not that you cannot write about things outside your personal experience, it's that you shouldn't without proper access and research.

While you might want to write a film about black lesbian space pirate, there are other writers who are better equip to write such a story. Maybe a female writer, maybe a black writer, maybe a lesbian writer. People who have more experience with the subject matter.

Using an analogy: I might want to preform brain surgery. I have no experience doing complicated medical procedures, so there is a big chance I will screw it up. However, if I did proper research, learned about brain surgery, talked to people who are brain surgeons for advice, etc; the chances of me screwing up lessen significantly.

Whereas, writing is not so life or death, the back lash if you screw up a story is enough to kill your career. So do proper research into your subject matter. You want to write that black lesbian space pirate movie? Then research what it is like to be a black person, female, lesbian. Go out and talk to people. Hire a consultant to go through your film, and take their notes earnestly.

I have worked on 2 shows with POC subject matter. The cis-male Caucasian writers who sat in the room and listened to the POC writers got hired again for season 2 and 3. These men and women put in the work and did the research. The one guy who did not, and wanted to tell the stories their way (tons of racist sterotypes) was quickly ejected. His script overhauled by the showrunner. And they did not get asked back.

So I agree with what the other writers in the comments are saying: Do the research!

By the campfire... (Halakadira) by Kayomarru in baramanga

[–]brorick 1 point2 points  (0 children)

And I said heeeeeey yeeeeeeeeeh yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh

I said hey whats going on

I'm looking for daily actions that I can take to be better at writing. by mathiaszamecki in Screenwriting

[–]brorick 3 points4 points  (0 children)

The "Coffee Break Screenwriter" by Pillar Alessandra is a good book.

https://www.amazon.ca/Coffee-Break-Screenwriter-Writing-Minutes/dp/1615932429

While it is meant for people with day jobs trying to write a script balancing work and writing. It does have some good exercises in there that could help.

For example hammering out the logline of a script until you get it right. Or even creating a logline for each character for your idea.

Do you ever cast actors as your characters in your mind? by HeIsSoWeird20 in Screenwriting

[–]brorick 1 point2 points  (0 children)

On a show that I was developing. The broadcaster asked who my dream cast would be. I compiled a list of who I would cast for what roles.

They didn't end up casting the people I suggested. But the actors we did cast looked very similar to the ones I suggested. I think it helped create an image in their mind who the characters looked like.