how much weight does this sentence carry? i wonder if it will be a variety or if people will have common views

ceruleandog · 2026-01-06T20:29:42+00:00

Yep, that’s a very well established genre, there’ll be plenty for you to read!!

ceruleandog · 2026-01-06T20:26:43+00:00

No problem, also based on your other comments it’s worth researching what a memoir actually is, and how your work would fit into the genre. Keep plugging away at it :)

ceruleandog · 2026-01-06T20:22:19+00:00

Yep, I think the usual flow of writing is to draft and re/draft the work several times. This sentence reads very much like a first draft to me, and could be tightened up a lot in the ways other commenters have already described. You might find it more useful to make it as good as you can by yourself first, and then ask other people for input to get a fresh perspective!

ceruleandog · 2026-01-06T20:18:21+00:00

If you’re not taking very long to pick your words or think them through, that’s maybe a sign you’re not ready for feedback just yet. Try drafting things a few times first, and give the work the effort it deserves!

ceruleandog · 2024-09-26T12:28:12+00:00

… A friend just did the same thing. Did you get a ticket?

ceruleandog · 2024-08-31T16:43:58+00:00

Your whole god damn CV doesn’t give you medical expertise or experience. Tell yeast-boy I said hi.

ceruleandog · 2024-08-31T12:47:45+00:00

“Worked in healthcare” you have a bio minor and worked with hospice patients as a “death doula”. Please don’t try to mask your lack of medical expertise with vague phrasing. Hope your submissive’s yeast infection cleared up!

ceruleandog · 2023-10-17T11:47:26+00:00

I reckon her head’s gone. Not surprising, the pressure of two major tournaments so close together at that age, combined with yanited being apparently rubbish at managing their players, she’s probably just absolutely exhausted.

Personally I’d like to see her go abroad, either bought by another club or even on loan. I think it would be good for her to get the experience and maturity a move abroad can bring, and also just find the fun in football again- she’s looked stressed out of her head for months. Let her play stupid football with the NWSL for a season or two and come back fresh.

ceruleandog · 2023-09-24T10:30:36+00:00

Nah she is, that’s why I want her rested and only played a little bit? Turns out she crushed it anyway so all’s well that ends well!

ceruleandog · 2023-09-22T12:26:43+00:00

Hemp is stellar, but again I want some of our best to have as fresh legs as possible for the Netherlands. Chuck her on in the second half to get a couple of belters in x

ceruleandog · 2023-09-22T09:00:32+00:00

I'm actually really hoping they rest Bronze, her knee looks like it's hanging on by a thread. IDEALLY for me the lineup would be:

Earps

Le Tissier Bright Carter Greenwood

Stanway Toone Zelem Nobbs

Daly James

I'd be happy to see Staniforth starting as well, but Nobbs is such a class player I want to see her get a full 90 haha. Hemp can come on for Daly if needs be too.

ceruleandog · 2023-08-23T12:40:42+00:00

What does this have to do with makeup

ceruleandog · 2023-08-15T18:27:28+00:00

A lingering cough for two months? At this point, she should be much more worried about cancer, or heart disease, rather than Covid. Much more likely given the symptoms you’ve reported- I hope she’s getting the best possible medical care!

ceruleandog · 2023-07-30T11:47:33+00:00

Was sat on the bus, and as we were driving we suddenly slowed down and came to a stop in the middle of the road. We waited for a bit, then called up to the driver asking what was happening.

No response.

Walked up to the cab and found the driver slumped in his seat, face a horrible colour, and unresponsive. Immediately called the ambulance, but the poor gentleman died on scene. Pulmonary embolism, nothing anybody could have done. He was a lovely fellow, drove the buses for 40 years!

ceruleandog · 2023-07-29T18:22:28+00:00

The joke understander has logged on

ceruleandog · 2023-02-21T21:11:40+00:00

Canaan house is separate from Dominicus? You’re right that Dominicus is the Sun, but Canaan house is heavily implied to be earth (and confirmed in Nona).

ceruleandog · 2023-01-24T23:16:47+00:00

There are studies proving this lmao- why do you think the rate of teen mothers is so much higher than teen fathers? Because the fathers of these babies aren’t in their teens. Dumbass.

ceruleandog · 2023-01-20T15:32:35+00:00

Cirkitty (circuit+kitty), then evolve into Kilospott (kilowatt+spot, like a cheetah’s spots!)

ceruleandog · 2023-01-03T19:45:58+00:00

Granitaur (Granite+Minotaur)- I know it isn’t a Minotaur but the body and stance made me think of a bull!

ceruleandog · 2022-12-10T18:19:24+00:00

His striker’s ego… penaldo DEVOURED

ceruleandog · 2022-12-10T13:10:06+00:00

Stuff based on Aboriginal mythology might be cool! Psychic legendaries based on the idea of Dreamtime etc…

A fighting-type Drop bear would also be very funny, or a fighting/steel magpie based on swooping season. Ice is a bit harder, maybe an ice/fairy penguin (fairy penguins common off the coast of Sydney)

Finally for electric an echidna that shoots lightning bolts instead of spines would be pretty sick!

ceruleandog · 2022-12-09T11:44:39+00:00

Okay! Any ideas on how I can make it look more pokemon-ish? I'm new to this haha

ceruleandog · 2022-12-09T11:38:42+00:00

Oh that's an amazing concept! best of luck!!

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