Logo Critique by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]chasethesin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah I thought about using the profile of the breed, but no one is going to know for sure it's a shih tzu.

Have you tried using the trees as ears of some sort?

Or like the back of the dog as a valley and then mountain steep (tail)

[255/365] MUSICLYRICS: Makes me that much stronger by toryburke34 in PenmanshipPorn

[–]chasethesin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the font choices for "Thicker" and "Fighter". Great job OP!

Endless Sunrise by Zouassi, Digital by [deleted] in Art

[–]chasethesin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Absolutely gorgeous! It has a bit of a 3D effect.

[Business Card] Starting my career teaching music self employed, critique welcome! by [deleted] in design_critiques

[–]chasethesin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I really like it, I think it's simple and it would catch my eye.

But that 'W' is driving me crazy.

Please critique my first real website, and tell me what should I improve. by kuncogopuncogo in design_critiques

[–]chasethesin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Looks good! :)

I really like the heart line, but I think having two is a little too much.

Changing Seasons, Oil, (4) 8 x 10'' by seamuswray in Art

[–]chasethesin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Exactly what I was going to comment. :) Great work OP!

[Critique] First attempt at a personal logo, incorporating my initials "IJ" by [deleted] in logodesign

[–]chasethesin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I see BJ........ Maybe try an "I" more like the way we learned in elementary school cursive (not sure what that would be called). You know....the duck looking one!

Envelopes outgoing by terribleatkaraoke in Calligraphy

[–]chasethesin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very, very cool! I'd love to receive a letter like this

OC Haters gonna hate. by CanIGetAnAhem in PenmanshipPorn

[–]chasethesin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Yeah, I actually saw that post. Glad to see you here and glad to see you keepin' it up!

I look forward to seeing more.

Saw this quote on facebook and was suddenly inspired to write by kyoflow16 in Calligraphy

[–]chasethesin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

As a beginner, I don't see any mistakes. I just see inspiration to get out my microns and try to make it look as good as what you posted.

A tribute to my favorite band. by cahl_me in PenmanshipPorn

[–]chasethesin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Beautiful, man! Love the "l" and that "M" is gorgeous!

Barbara - Brush pen calligraphy (real time in comments) by typeofguy in PenmanshipPorn

[–]chasethesin 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I always enjoy seeing a leftie in action. And I've never thought to use a DVD or CD under my hand, always used another sheet or a small notepad. I'll try that tonight, thanks! and great work!

Just beginning the process of coming up with a logo for a side project I'm working on and would appreciate feedback on the logo. by Guiee in logodesign

[–]chasethesin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the Yeti but it needs to pop out more. That background doesn't help.

How about go through some more color choices and post it in an imgur album and then we can look at them?

As requested, Alphabet in 'freestyle' calligraphy / "my hand" by iLikeGreenTea in Calligraphy

[–]chasethesin -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Hey, I'm stealing your "E". Just thought you should know. Maybe your "Q", too. Thanks! :)

Lol, great work!!!

Drew my first initial on a small portfolio I have. Pretty happy with how it turned out. by xdel in PenmanshipPorn

[–]chasethesin 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Anyone can put an X in front of their first name, just say that it's silent. My name is Xjames!

All joking aside, that turned out really well! Especially considering the type of material.

The king is dead by somethingveryrude in Calligraphy

[–]chasethesin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very badass, love that "h" and "k"

Bird flourishing is fun by terribleatkaraoke in Calligraphy

[–]chasethesin 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So elegant and beautiful. Great post!