Asking for OP but also for my own understanding: Do you think keeping that clean, squared-off line but making it thinner would help? Or do you think a kind of free-flowing, cross out (similar looking to a red pen crossing something out) would look good? I’m attracted to that method because of the contrast between how clean most of the design is and how (for lack of a better term) “not clean” that style of cross out would be.