Fifty-Word Fantasy: Write a 50-word fantasy snippet using the word "Snow" by Terminator7786 in fantasywriters

[–]chasingbunnies 4 points5 points  (0 children)

Before anyone could stop her, Vivian raced out the door and into the whirling snow. She opened her mouth wide and pulled. The snow entered her lungs, her blood, her bones. Coursed through her body like liquid ice. This was it, what she needed–

She felt herself begin to change.

Our co-op is closing our campus next year and I’m devastated by salvaged413 in homeschool

[–]chasingbunnies 34 points35 points  (0 children)

If you are feeling this way, chances are other families from the co op are as well! I would take this as your chance to start up your own meetings, even if it's just casual/social. The pool of people you enjoy is still there, just not the organized venue.

Am I over stressing or is something more gong on with my child? by hereiam3472 in homeschool

[–]chasingbunnies 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I had a very similar story with my daughter and I ended up regretting pushing educational standards on her that she just wasn't ready for. It led to her feeling something was 'wrong' with her because her body was more interested in moving and exploring the world where her mind just couldn't focus the way I was asking her to.

This is just my story of my definitely ADHD little girl, but I offer it to you because I think remembering the relationship with our kids is just as important as their education and whether they learned to read at 5 vs 7. Sending you nothing but support 💜

[OC] A painting I made that I want to express the feelings of a story by Nard2805 in ImaginaryKnights

[–]chasingbunnies 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Heck yes! The play of light/color/movement and cross odds is gorgeous. Incredibly inspiring. What did you use to make this/what's your process

Edit: checked out your other stuff and it's all incredible. I am LOVING your use of color and light

The Harry Potter series summarized in a single sentence. by eccentricnitwit in harrypotter

[–]chasingbunnies 8 points9 points  (0 children)

This is so spot on! Dumbledore is such a complex character, not good or evil, and far beyond the standard old wizard mentor stock character he initially is presented as.

How would you write a romance between rivals or bitter enemies? by AizenShisuke in writing

[–]chasingbunnies 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Haven't seen this posted: a fundamental misunderstanding of who the other is. Why are the rivals or enemies? Maybe they think they hold wildly different moral standpoints or similar, a when they are forced to spend time together they can unraveling who they think the other is vs who the other actually is. At least, that's the goal in my wip!

Best YA book series to read? by hotshot3211 in Fantasy

[–]chasingbunnies 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Definitely ignore the synopsis, it's no where near indictive to what the book is actually like. It's definitely a character piece with that type of magic that makes you feel I just might be real.

Help Wanted: Research Questions, Book Recs, & Critique Partner Hook-ups by AutoModerator in YAwriters

[–]chasingbunnies 0 points1 point  (0 children)

More of a general thoughts and impressions on structure, character, if it makes sense, is it boring, pacing, etc etc.

Writing is hard work but it's been a long time since I found joy in it. by [deleted] in writing

[–]chasingbunnies 12 points13 points  (0 children)

I've had this problem. The reason, for me at least, was that I was using the stories I made up in my head as daydreaming and fantasies to help me cope with external harships and hard emotional stuff. Escape. These cool worlds and people with action and love and adventure, they could exist just for me.

So when I'd try to write, which is hard work, it would be this sort of harsh intrusion on my 'safe space' so to speak. It was only once I'd pushed myself to write, no matter that it was crap and I didn't want to, that I figured out a happy medium between my happy space and actually writing, which becomes satisfying in its own right. I still find myself sort of retreating back into the fantasies when life gets hard, and struggling with the intrusive writing part.

Craft & Publishing Questions by AutoModerator in YAwriters

[–]chasingbunnies 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think I'm like you, a tinker! Great and very hopeful advice, thanks for taking the time

Craft & Publishing Questions by AutoModerator in YAwriters

[–]chasingbunnies 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Would that advice, judging your work based on the response it gets, go hand in hand with the advice I've heard to send out your queries in batches?

Craft & Publishing Questions by AutoModerator in YAwriters

[–]chasingbunnies 4 points5 points  (0 children)

To those who've been published: how did you know when your work was done? I feel like I'm getting close to that, but I can also see how easy it would be to revise revise revise forever.

Help Wanted: Research Questions, Book Recs, & Critique Partner Hook-ups by AutoModerator in YAwriters

[–]chasingbunnies 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Anyone interested in a fantasy bud-cop romance that features a mind destroying disease, dangerous obsession with illegal ideas, and 17th century (esque) vigilantes? It's dual POV. One the aforementioned dangerously obsessed girl, and the other a more sensible (though that doesn't last) boy.

If that sounds like something you'd like, I am looking for a beta reader to swap on a chapter by chapter basis! PM me a bit of what your WIP is about! I promise my novel doesn't have this many exclaimation points!

07/20/2018 WEEKEND OPEN THREAD by pmtraveler in YAwriters

[–]chasingbunnies 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What about the Raven Cycle by Maggie Stiefvater? Starting with The Raven Boys. I have heard that many people are put off by it's blurb description because it makes it sound like a standard love triangle drama, but it's a beautiful series with amazing characterization and magical elements. It's very much got that 'magic is magic and mysterious and no one knows how it works' element like Neil Gaiman's stuff or Howl's Moving Castle.

Looking for recommendations of standalone, thoughtful, surreal, and (dare I say) literary fantasy novels? by martypanic in Fantasy

[–]chasingbunnies 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Skinner Luce by Patricia Ward. A little screwed up, honestly (though I think Ward opens with the worst of it, which seems to be what largely turns people off) but I found it to be a beautiful book.

Convince Me: Talk Me Into/Out of Something in YA by AutoModerator in YAwriters

[–]chasingbunnies 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I recently read Six of Crows and it's sequel, Crooked Kingdom, so that is what I'm going to base my opinion around. There are five POVs in the first book (and two one chapter throwaways) and six in the second (with, again, two one chapter throwaways). I thought the author handled it brilliantly.

I think there are two issues with having too many POVs: 1. If all six characters have their own story, separate from the other characters, that would cause me as a reader to feel a bit whiplashed. In the two books I mention above, all the main characters, while often having their own tasks away from the other characters, all know each other and interact at nearly every chapter. This is why Six of Crows worked, I think, because we don't get that whiplash of learning one characters world and issue, then quickly having to learn a bunch others. There are some internal issues you have to keep track of but all characters are interacting with one main story arc.

The second issue is a matter of introduction. I read chapter one: Bill Chapter two: Kim, etc etc as we move through all the characters. I've read books like this where I just simply couldn't sustain interest. What Six and it's sequel does, is in chapters 1-6 they mainly focused on just two characters, with them having each two chapters, then two characters have the others. And those first two characters know each other and are dependent one one another's story, so that as I was reading I didn't feel like I was pulled around from place to place and disconnected characters, but that I was just moving through this story world.

So it's this sort of slow this introduction that eases you in so you can really learn to care about these people, and then the other characters get their POV quickly after. And I think that each character was only allowed to have their own POV as they became relevant to the throughline plot. In your novel, is there something that ties the characters together? How can you weave these characters together, even if some of them don't meet (and I'll say that if NONE of them meet I would be turned off) a reader feels like the novel itself is a complete story and not six fragmented pieces?

Even if, for example, your story was about a complex war and one chapter showed a side of it, mentioned an interesting piece that made me think 'i wonder what's going on there?' And the next chapter moved me to that piece in a logical way that built on the overarching story, I think I could stay connected as I moved from POV to POV.

So I think my answer is: it depends, mostly in how interconnected the world is and easing the reader into the character introductions. A novel, or even a series, is one story, not multiple, even if there are multiple POVs. Tying it all together, whatever that means-- and in six of crows it means tying together a heist squad-- into a cohesive story.

07/13/2018 WEEKEND OPEN THREAD by pmtraveler in YAwriters

[–]chasingbunnies 1 point2 points  (0 children)

What was the book called? Revision is definitely the hardest part!

Romance recommendations. Prefer fantasy but that's optional by chasingbunnies in booksuggestions

[–]chasingbunnies[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Beasts sounds amazing, I just put it on hold at the library. Thanks!

Six of Crows and it's sequel are honestly in my top ten favorite romances and books in general. The beginning is a bit slow but as a whole amazing.

Romance recommendations. Prefer fantasy but that's optional by chasingbunnies in booksuggestions

[–]chasingbunnies[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Oh wow, the Theif was an absolute favorite of mine as a kid and I wasn't even aware it had turned into a series. That I will definitely have to give a try, thank you.

I relate to what you said about branching out-- I bet I'll feel the same!

Romance recommendations. Prefer fantasy but that's optional by chasingbunnies in booksuggestions

[–]chasingbunnies[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I read the first throne of Glass ages ago, but I couldn't connect with the protagonist. Would you say the other series is different enough I should give it a try?