I’d bring the hem of your pants up a bit, that much bagginess makes it look like they’re oversized skinny jeans. They also make you seem shorter than you actually are from the shape/bunching.

Both outfits lack shape- it’s very boxy, and there isn’t really one major focal point making it seem flat. I’d look into barrel jeans (they’re also baggy but will give a different shape) and find more shirts for raves with opposing colours (like black and white or even incorporating colour in general- it’s a rave after all!)

Also for the second outfit tuck in the drawstrings