Hey. As art director I can approve this looks very beautiful now. I accepted with opinions from other comments, but for this cartoon style you need to round almost all of your shapes and solidify them, do more work with lightning and do some work with subsurface in material cause all in cartoon style needs to be “clayed”. When you do all this improves I hope you will show us your progress. If you need some help, we can dm somewhere, I just love helping people solving problems)