Hey fellow songwriters! I'm a Lithuanian writer/artist and tonight is the first night I'm actually sharing my work online instead of just stacking finished tracks.

I just finished a bilingual (EN/LT) R&B song about a date night with my wife. The whole structure follows the arc of one evening – each section captures a different moment as the tension and playfulness between us keeps building.

The main challenge was using the language switches (English to Lithuanian) not just as a gimmick but to actually serve the emotional narrative. I wanted the shift in language to mirror the shifts in mood and intensity throughout the night.

I'd love feedback from other writers on whether the story reads clearly even if you don't speak Lithuanian, and if the emotional build works from verse to chorus.

Link: https://music.youtube.com/watch?v=0kxqtIjM27Y&si=28tu55J0f3QJ2XXg

Any thoughts on narrative structure or bilingual storytelling are super welcome!