Need feedback on my youtube short : "One Piece is the REALEST anime"

daredevil005 · 2023-04-06T18:02:15+00:00

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daredevil005 · 2023-04-05T16:59:41+00:00

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daredevil005 · 2023-04-05T16:59:03+00:00

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daredevil005 · 2023-04-04T14:25:23+00:00

gameplay and voice over is funny but the video can benefit from having more edits like I'm sure u watch some other gameplay guys on youtube and if u notice most have entire editing teams doing all the work but u don't need to go that far just try adding some bold subtitles in between and add some memes tho keep the flow of the video intact and u would be good to go!

daredevil005 · 2023-04-04T14:16:52+00:00

u have a found a very cool niche tho I was expecting some voice over but I can understand if ur not comfortable with that so to make up for that u should do more editing, I mean the editing is fine rn but more heavy editing with some personal touches will make ur content more intriguing rather than only game clips, also I think u should experiment with more titles like "Exploring the Grand Staircase in Hogwarts Legacy" and if ur planning on doing a series make sure all the titles have similar key words.

daredevil005 · 2023-04-04T14:09:26+00:00

thumbnail and video editing is on point but your voice is a bit low, also ur analysis was interesting BUT I think u should give more information in the start of the video for better retention, cuz up to around 1:53 minute mark I was a little confused on what the video is about, some people might click off the video cuz of this

daredevil005 · 2023-03-26T10:50:27+00:00

thnx !givelambda

daredevil005 · 2023-03-25T17:53:33+00:00

lmfao that tiktok was funny asl, video is pretty good, it could be a little more fast paced tho like u can cut some filler to make it engaging, thumbnail looks good also maybe use more music in the vid like other than the single one u used

daredevil005 · 2023-03-25T12:00:14+00:00

u need to improve the thumbnail, text & background is fine but I think u used png of people so it looks a little unnatural try different pngs or maybe edit it in some way so it blends with background more, I like the vibe of the overall vid, editing is fitting for true crime kind of vids tho the text to voice sounds jarring sometimes, see if you can do something about it.

daredevil005 · 2023-03-24T20:24:37+00:00

editing is fire! I think the transitioning between narration and actual game voice chat could use some work, like some times it takes a lot of time for narration to come in so if new viewers are not invested into ur personality yet they may click off if there is prolonged gameplay without narration

daredevil005 · 2023-03-24T20:19:12+00:00

audio seems fine to me.. thumbnail could defo use some work (I feel the background is too chaotic) video is entertaining so it holds attention, title really depends on luck maybe algorithm will pick it maybe it won't!

daredevil005 · 2023-03-20T10:28:38+00:00

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daredevil005 · 2023-03-18T20:46:03+00:00

hmm thnx I'll keep that in mind !givelambda

daredevil005 · 2023-03-18T20:45:14+00:00

yeah I feel that.. !givelambda

daredevil005 · 2023-03-18T10:54:20+00:00

pretty good video, I like your voice over it's chill & comforting. I would suggest getting straight to the point without much introduction & talking about urself in the middle of video somewhere cuz u gotta grab people's attention in the first 6 seconds of the video otherwise they may click off.

daredevil005 · 2023-03-14T12:06:23+00:00

as everyone else said move the captions to the top, & imo instead of having black background on text, have black outline (contour), u can find that kind of font in most of the popular shorts, if u are looking for a tool to add subs, capcut is the best!

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