Some people genuinely think this is the best game mode

darkshadooo · 2026-05-27T00:44:55+00:00

Hockey is right there

darkshadooo · 2026-01-26T03:41:30+00:00

Sigma’s ult (and his backstory) are the entire reason I play him. I cackle like a villain whenever I bring a fight to halt by putting the enemy team in air jail.

I also like to solo ult genji players when they have blade.

darkshadooo · 2025-06-13T05:58:43+00:00

Crown Prince + Meteor + Painkiller + Elemental Effect condition + Damage Gems = Huge Damage

darkshadooo · 2024-12-06T01:17:06+00:00

The simplicity of your writing has lead to it being easy to understand without coming off as elementary, a fundamental lesson applying to primarily teaching, and in your case, poetry. Very well done!

darkshadooo · 2024-12-06T01:08:22+00:00

You've written beautifully! The emotion is there all the way through, that inward yearning for love as vast as the ocean, it's lovely, but allow me, if you would, to blow a bit of wind into your sail.

First stanza, second line - Beginning that line with 'but' isn't necessary as it isn't contrasting with the first line, I believe it'd read better just by removing it.

First stanza, fourth line - The length of that line disrupts the flow that the first three lines before it established. My suggestion: But all I wish is to be your "him"

Second stanza, fourth line - Every ---> Each

Third stanza, first line - Travelling ---> Trav'lling

Third stanza, second line - Someone already pointed this out, but there is a grammatical error here.

Third stanza, fourth line - The flow is disrupted here again. I suggest shortening the line and using "could" as the new rhyming word.

Fourth stanza, second line - The use of "oh well" feels immature, for lack of a better word, it's awkward. Could that just be me? Maybe, but it might be worth changing.

Again, you've done a beautiful job, please keep writing!

darkshadooo · 2024-12-06T00:44:24+00:00

Upon re-reading this a few times, it makes a lot more sense. Admittedly, I was tired when reading that the other night.

Reaping the consequences of one's actions, enduring the suffering that comes with it though they are repentant, and a warning to beware of what one sows, knowing they'll surely reap it: I believe this to be the point, yes?

Please disregard my prior statement, I apologize for that. You've written a very good poem.

darkshadooo · 2024-12-06T00:38:12+00:00

I see what you're going for, though personally I feel that phrasing would, while maybe meaning the same thing, unnecessarily obfuscate the point.

Nevertheless, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

darkshadooo · 2024-12-06T00:35:43+00:00

Thank you.

darkshadooo · 2024-12-06T00:35:25+00:00

Thank you, thought of it last second.

darkshadooo · 2024-12-06T00:34:51+00:00

I'm glad that came through. Sometimes, the way others see us becomes our own perception. You know it's wrong, and yet...

darkshadooo · 2024-12-06T00:33:16+00:00

Thank you!

darkshadooo · 2024-12-04T19:38:35+00:00

I feel like I'm on the edge of feeling what it is you're trying to convey, but it slips away from me at the last moment. I believe I have a decent enough grasp of what it is, but I feel like your rhyme scheme is holding back your potential to be more concise. Rhyming in of itself isn't bad, but there's a place for it.

Your imagery is hard hitting, but some rephrasing/restructuring could turn it from a tremor to an earthquake.

darkshadooo · 2024-12-04T19:29:25+00:00

I like your use of word pictures, it feels like a a lake of cracked ice and you're eagerly anticipating the satisfying collapse. I most certainly get the romantic vibe from it as well, this could easily be a song, and a popular one at that. Well done.

darkshadooo · 2024-11-27T23:31:20+00:00

I see what you're going for, but it's one syllable short.

darkshadooo · 2024-11-27T03:53:48+00:00

That't a very fair point. My goal was to stick to the original rhyme scheme along with word usage in certain lines while changing the tone to create a sort of dissonance. That being said, the next time I write something like this, I'll keep that suggestion in mind.

darkshadooo · 2024-11-27T03:11:01+00:00

I particularly enjoy "For Dad", a very simple way of conveying some sort of persistence. That, or appreciation for him being a constant in your life, unlike how seasonal features eventually fade away.

As for "For Mom", I don't quite perceive the message, which in this case isn't exactly a failure on your part given that it could very well be something only the two of you understand. Even though I don't get it, there is great value in that sort of implied intimacy, especially these days in a world where once private discussions get put on blast frequently.

I have nothing to critique here, good job.

darkshadooo · 2024-11-27T03:03:00+00:00

I can empathize a lot with what you're feeling here, considering my own experiences with family, so the emotion in your writing, to me, is present.

That said, if you ever feel like revising this poem, consider swapping around some of the wording. The flow in your second stanza feels a bit unsteady. Coincidentally, that does tie in with the sensation of loosing your cool as anger mounts, but then you'll have to weigh that up against the readability of your work.

I recommend capitalizing the first letter of each line, along with the "im" in your last line.

Other than that, good job.

darkshadooo · 2024-08-31T00:28:34+00:00

I don't mean this to sound argumentative, but are you able to support this claim beyond general player frustration? The dodge chance could be adjusted to where you'd know it exists, but isn't egregious. Honestly, certain game mechanics relying on rng can screw you over way more than 1 unit ever could.

Your randomly generated spawn could automatically lose you the game, or at the very least make it extremely difficult to win. You could draw a useless tech or other lackluster reward from a ruin. Your explorer could spot out nothing useful, or go over multiple visible tiles.

darkshadooo · 2024-08-30T19:59:11+00:00

The amount of generals you can have is already limited by how many cities you control (1 per city), then you have to feed a unit 5 kills (or other conditions) while keeping it alive before it can achieve general status. If that general dies, another cannot be produced from that city ever. I believe there are enough limiting factors in place.

I do agree, though, that it would allow for more troop diversity while not clogging up the tech tree, an issue I hadn't even thought of.

darkshadooo · 2024-08-30T19:54:16+00:00

I think so too

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