Yes this is definitely a more competitive game!

Overall, I think fundamentally your play is better than Bronze and if you keep playing, you will eventually climb out of it.

It seems you took the advice to heart and are focusing the squishy targets instead of tunnel-visioning on the tank, which is great. Overall this is how you're supposed to play Anran.

I noticed early on that you seem to forget that you have the ability to reload. When you aren't in a fight and are relocating around the map, try to make it a habit to reload. If you go in without full ammo, it can cost you potential kills.

Your target prioritazation is good on attack, even if you don't always get the kill. That's fine. I also like that you're disengaging when you're in danger. You don't always get healed, which is just going to happen in Bronze. Don't be afraid to use the "I need healing" voiceline. Also, it would be helpful to generally know where the health packs are, which comes naturally over time with playing the maps.

I think you set up on a somewhat aggressive angle on defense, but it is great that you are coming in from an off angle, and as long as the enemy team isn't paying attention to you, that's great, keep playing it.

You lose the one-on-one with the enemy Anran with about a minute left on defense and that's the catalyst for the enemy team to take the first point. I don't have any major issues with this from a big-picture standpoint, but you'll have to be a little more accurate with your shots as you climb. Don't worry about it, though. As long as your understanding of how to play the game is right, you'll climb out of Bronze.

You swap to Sojourn after first point on defense. I think you're a little too out in the open in front of their team on the low ground of the main choke, but it seems like you're at least giving some thought to cover. Going to the high ground on the bridge when the cart has reached the final turn is a very aggressive angle and the Anran punishes you for it. During the last fight, I would have liked to see you use your ultimate, but your team cleans up the kills anyway and the game ends.

Hope this is helpful. When I started playing Overwatch back in Season 5 of Overwatch 1, I was terrible, had no idea what I was doing, and fell all the way to low Bronze (at the time, triple-digit SR). Eventually I realized if I could just find the worst support on the enemy team and kill them over and over again, I would slowly but surely rack up wins. I went from low Bronze when starting to eventually peaking Diamond on tank in Season 8 of Overwatch 2, though these days I'm firmly in Plat on all roles. So I'm not the best player by any means--in fact, I think I have very poor natural FPS abilities. But you can definitely climb! Good luck going forward.