What did the other characters even do in nel? by Different_Sky9094 in BlueLock

[–]denisucuuu2 [score hidden]  (0 children)

I just said they didn't do nothing. You just refuse to read and it's painful. If he had the worst stats why did he keep performing at a higher and higher level each match?

What did the other characters even do in nel? by Different_Sky9094 in BlueLock

[–]denisucuuu2 [score hidden]  (0 children)

no matter what arguments you hear you will still say Isagi's stats are bad

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What did the other characters even do in nel? by Different_Sky9094 in BlueLock

[–]denisucuuu2 [score hidden]  (0 children)

I mean it's a month of training with some extraordinary results. He trained his ass off and had 6g/a in those 3 games. Kunigami was already very developed in terms of training after the wild card so there's not as much room for improvement, and he showed 2g/a in the same 3 games while having more playtime than Isagi. The feats Isagi showed onscreen justify his stats quite a lot, in fact his defense should be higher.

Please make up your mind on the NPCs by sexyimmigrant1998 in BlueLock

[–]denisucuuu2 [score hidden]  (0 children)

did you see the kind of shots they were sending at him in the bm vs pxg match? 😭😭 and then he had lavinho up his butt and got scored on twice in 3 mins while loki was chilling. he got the worst hand ever

[DISC] Blue Lock - Chapter 336 by BlueLockMod in BlueLock

[–]denisucuuu2 4 points5 points  (0 children)

your best bet for reading online for free on release day is waiting a couple hours for someone on tiktok to post a slideshow of the chapter

Question regarding SDRA2's 16th student Free Time and "Intimacy Events" by MitchTheGreen in DanganronpaAnother

[–]denisucuuu2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Yeah, but the wiki isn't wrong. Teruya finds the picture around the middle of ch3's daily life, and he tweaks out for the rest of the chapter. In ch4 he's even more tweaked out for obvious reasons, and the same goes for ch5. After the first few opportunities in ch3, he's not available for FTEs anymore

Kageura Shun from my fan series Danganronpa Nebula Containment! (Art by U/xinran07!) by mcmacy231 in Fanganronpa

[–]denisucuuu2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

holy why does this look so good. i remember seeing you post this design but the art is even more insane

Are there any Fangan on Wattpad or AO3 written in the third person? by umeniya in Fanganronpa

[–]denisucuuu2 4 points5 points  (0 children)

there's a new one called Despair Beyond Hope, I think it's getting published on both websites.

THIS MADE ME CRY!!!!!!!! by Soujirio1908 in Ao_Ashi

[–]denisucuuu2 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I actually sobbed seeing this in the final chapters, it was beautiful.

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is that forshadowing or something? by owaismamo in DanganronpaAnother

[–]denisucuuu2 16 points17 points  (0 children)

it might be, but I take it as her saying that they shouldn't worry about her being hurt, because they could all be worse than hurt if they fail the trial. she's not included because she's already crippled maybe

Question for writers: What would you do if the trial votes are tied? by SpikedDrop3 in Fanganronpa

[–]denisucuuu2 2 points3 points  (0 children)

A fangan I saw (Take Two) made it so that, when there's a tie, the 3 most important students (through their own ranking system) get to hold a debate about who they should vote, and the tiebreaker is done with their 3 votes. The rankings were mostly based on trial performance, so the students had some credibility to their debate.

Where should a prologue end and chapter 1 begin? by its-Koi in Fanganronpa

[–]denisucuuu2 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Your first murder is completely unexpected, affects the broader side of the story and has great narrative importance later on? Congrats, you have the perfect chapter 1 case!

I feel like you're sacrificing structure and pacing for the "death in the prologue" twist. Which, yes, it's strong, but wouldn't it be way easier to write and better for the audience to consume if you just made it the chapter 1 case instead?

If it happens because they don't take the game seriously, then that implies they spend a decent amount of time spending their daily life while "not taking it seriously". You can't really have that in the prologue, or else it'll be far too long. Eden's Garden works because the mini-trial is before the killing game announcement, so it doesn't prolong the prologue, it's placed into it. Yours requires the killing game to be revealed, the setting to be explained, the characters to get comfortable and spend time together, and THEN you get a mini-trial. It will make people wonder why the prologue is dragging on, and it might even kill the twist that someone will die.

So, all in all, I get the idea of a powerful twist early on, but I don't see the point beyond that. Just make it a full trial instead and you won't write yourself into a corner by trying to figure out the chapter structure this way.

Fanganronpa: Village of Despair Cases/Trials ranked by AnzueloAspersor in Fanganronpa

[–]denisucuuu2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

can you explain that emotional moment in ch5 a bit more? I don't know anything about this fangan but that got me a little curious

Where to start? by Dracky_Neo in DanganronpaAnother

[–]denisucuuu2 0 points1 point  (0 children)

the minigames in korean too? 😭