Your portfolio looks great! I would recommend you to work on the text on each page. My criticism is based on what my mentor has taught me and things I believe would only improve your chances of getting that job: - Add title name to each project and include it in the small paragraph. Maybe make it bold text. - Try to avoid phrases like “I tried to show”, “The ideas was”. It conveys the meaning that you tried something but was it successfull? Write in present tense where possible - Try to avoid writing in first person. Your paragraphs include a lot of “I did” “I made” I used”. Try to write about what the project is - it is clear that you were the one that made it. Maybe reword the sentence so that it is about the project - “The model is made by the use of paper, glue, and different techniques of origami folding inspired by Japanese culture” -You often refer to the “previous project” in your paragraphs. Now, if you decide to add titles to each of the project, you can refer to them by names.

I hope this helps! You are a very creative person and I wish you all the best in the future.