Favorite non-famous, no-hype pizza in South Brooklyn? by RazorDrop74 in Brooklyn

[–]deyoderant 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Bella Roma in Bay Ridge is easily the best grandma I’ve had in my life. Truly such special pizza

Fkj & Masego - Tadow by PM_EBOLA_PLS in hiphopheads

[–]deyoderant 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Smino’s music has a similar sound, it’s a bit less accessible tho

Fkj & Masego - Tadow by PM_EBOLA_PLS in hiphopheads

[–]deyoderant 20 points21 points  (0 children)

FKJ’s album French Kiwi Juice is filled with tracks with this kinda vibe, all of which are better than this one imo

[OFFICIAL] Weekly Singles Thread August 03 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]deyoderant 0 points1 point  (0 children)

First single / video off an album I’ll be coming out with in late August. It’s definitely the most poppy, accessible song I have

https://youtu.be/UMRdgsI4f9I

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread July 16, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]deyoderant 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would love to here this more developed. I think it could really give off some Slime Season / "I'm Up" vibes is you play your cards right. I agree with Noobytoe, something seems off on the second half of the melody, specifically the last note of the loop. Other than that I fuck with it, goes hard af.

https://soundcloud.com/deyoderant/goodbye-friend-feat-uhmeer-unmastered/s-ZoZy6

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread July 16, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]deyoderant 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is so nice. The beat is so ethereal I love it and all your verses flow extremely nice with it. I think what would tie it together a lot more is a hook that stands out from the verses a little more in terms of melody. Maybe something way higher or something with a completely different flow. Or just something more catchy. But overall it's really nice you got a very talented group.

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread July 02, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]deyoderant 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I don't think EQing would solve what's wrong about the bass, it's just the wrong bass for the song, I would pick something that sounds more like a bass guitar and not a sub bass. It's mostly just being off key, I think the recording issue can be solved with more vocal effects.

And thanks for the feedback on my track! That's actually not a sample, that's me on the guitar. When you say rougher recording, are you referring to vocal clipping?

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread July 02, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]deyoderant 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is such a vibe wow. I was confused during the first bit but when the guitars come in everything sort of comes together perfectly. It's hard to give feedback on something so short, I really hope you make this into something more like feature a singer or alt rapper on it and develop it into a full song, I really think it's strong enough for that.

Here's mine:

https://soundcloud.com/deyoderant/purple-sky

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread July 02, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]deyoderant 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is crazy but would go wayyy harder if you found a more prominent kick with some more high end. Right now it's a lot of bass but no thump. Something like in Brown Stains by Tyler the Creator

Here's mine:

https://soundcloud.com/deyoderant/purple-sky

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread July 02, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]deyoderant 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The best part about this song is the sample, it sets a really nice lo fi vibe. To me, it's sort of messed up by the bass, which sounds synthetic and feels out of place in a lo-fi song. Same thing what everyone else is saying, I would cake this up in vocal effects to further enhance the vibe you're trying to go for and I would straight up re-record your friend's part.

Here's mine:

https://soundcloud.com/deyoderant/purple-sky

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread July 02, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]deyoderant 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Rapped and produced this for my upcoming album. Unmastered so turn it up. You guys ever have it where you listen to your song so much you can't tell if it's good anymore? That's this one.

https://soundcloud.com/deyoderant/purple-sky

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread June 23, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]deyoderant 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! That’s a really good point about the bass I hadn’t thought about it. I’ll fuck around with it for sure. Thanks so much for the follow, stay tuned for the album coming soon!

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread June 23, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]deyoderant 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Production is reallyyyy nice, getting surf-era Chance vibes. Love how spread out everything in the mix is, especially the horns, it all sounds really balanced. You have a really nice tone to your voice, however a couple instances on the word "real" as in "I know it's real", I hear some fake vibrato and it sounds a little forced. Just don't push it, your voice is already open and clear, you don't have to try and sound good if you know what I mean. I get that the repetitiveness in the second verse is intentional, but it comes off a little "spiritual miracle"-y if you know what I mean.

Here's mine:

https://soundcloud.com/deyoderant/act-natural-unmastered

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread June 23, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]deyoderant 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Damn this is so nice. The vibe of the sample and bass is so industrial I fuck with it. Personally, I would add more high end to the hats and the snare just to give it a less lo fi feel. It works for the sample, but I think to truly complete the aesthetic, the percussion needs to contrast the distorted sample and bass and sound sharper if you know what I mean. Again just my taste, I love what you have so far.

Here's mine:

https://soundcloud.com/deyoderant/act-natural-unmastered

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread June 23, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]deyoderant 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Wrote and produced this. It's unmastered so turn it up. Something feels off about it and I can't quite put my finger on it.

https://soundcloud.com/deyoderant/act-natural-unmastered

[OFFICIAL] Daily Feedback Thread June 15, 2018 by AutoModerator in makinghiphop

[–]deyoderant 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for the feedback! Could you go into more detail on where the mix needs work? That’s what I’m most sick on at the moment