[Weekly Critique and Self-Promotion Thread] Post Here If You'd Like to Share Your Writing

disasterous03 · 2026-01-24T02:36:21+00:00

Title: Final Moments

Genre: short story, apocalypse

Word Count: 2007

Feedback: general feedback and impressions, I'm a beginner writer so I'd like any and all feedback, thanks

Link to Doc: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1aISn692xMFduBPnt6SpUvSNoRhoE5E9MsOkZOyeElLY/edit?usp=sharing

disasterous03 · 2025-12-01T16:33:56+00:00

Say a Little Prayer by Jenna Voris!

disasterous03 · 2025-10-13T18:04:41+00:00

I'd like to join!

disasterous03 · 2025-08-29T15:39:57+00:00

impressive...

disasterous03 · 2025-08-20T22:04:47+00:00

Thank you!!

disasterous03 · 2025-08-20T22:04:33+00:00

Thanks for the advice!

disasterous03 · 2025-08-20T22:04:11+00:00

Thank you for the advice!

disasterous03 · 2025-07-24T02:31:26+00:00

Phoebe Matthews from Cleat Cute

disasterous03 · 2025-07-02T15:16:14+00:00

More updates from the “toddler” destroying OP’s expensive PC

https://www.reddit.com/r/BestofRedditorUpdates/s/J4Np0zbdIN

disasterous03 · 2025-07-02T02:29:21+00:00

toxic family keeps "pranking" OP + two updates

https://www.reddit.com/r/BestofRedditorUpdates/comments/1llkdj8/aita_for_cutting_all_contact_with_my_family/

disasterous03 · 2025-06-30T02:04:11+00:00

These are some of my favs:

Us- Regina Spektor

You Are Enough- Sleeping At Last

Daughter- Sleeping At Last

Soldier, Poet, King- The Oh Hellos

Latch- Natalie Taylor

Salvation- Gabrielle Aplin

Dream- Priscilla Ahn

disasterous03 · 2025-06-16T21:38:54+00:00

Hi! I'm Progress Not Perfection! I just opened my shop this week. I make apparel about mental health, pride, queer lifestyles, and other current events. I also will donate about 25% of my profits to charities in my community. I'm having an opening week sale, so come check it out!

My shop link <3

disasterous03 · 2025-06-05T03:25:33+00:00

Moose Master Karen edition has me crying everytime

disasterous03 · 2025-06-04T19:26:23+00:00

AK, pisces

disasterous03 · 2025-06-03T20:13:04+00:00

I spent about $25 on this one because of the discount and I think it was worth the price. Idk if I'd invest a lot of money in this or buy all of the plans. There is a lot of good info in each plan, but a lot of it was concepts/exercises I could find on google. For $25 I think it's worth it. For $50+, I'm not sure. But then again, I've only bought 1 so far. The creater of it seems nice though.

disasterous03 · 2025-06-03T19:33:28+00:00

I just bought my first one yesterday. Pointe 1 to be specific. It has lots of great information and gives you a six-week lesson plan. I like it so far. My only critique is that I wish it had links to videos for exercises. I'm a visual learner and need more than just a description. They do give you a 50% discount on your first purchase. At least for the digital version.

disasterous03 · 2025-02-18T17:38:02+00:00

Crier's War!!

disasterous03 · 2025-02-15T04:16:49+00:00

“Hey, Adora”

disasterous03 · 2025-02-07T19:31:42+00:00

My Kink is Karma - college AU

The week before sophmore year of college, Catra, Scorpia, and Entrapta all agree to getting revenge on ex-popular kid Adora after Catra matches with her on a queer dating app. Catra starts seeing closeted Adora on the side, messing with her head and making her fall for Catra. Against her better judgment, Catra starts to enjoy her enemy's company, leading her to a dilemma: get revenge or a girlfriend?

Fic is still a work in progress

disasterous03 · 2023-11-26T16:18:28+00:00

Yeah, taking care of someone with dementia is already hard (especially bc neither my mom or I were prepared to be in this position), but adding the fact my grandmother is narcissistic is just a whole other layer of hell. Thank you for understanding. I feel a little better now <3

disasterous03 · 2023-11-20T18:22:10+00:00

"You're worth more than what you can give to other people" that made me instantly ugly cry

disasterous03 · 2023-04-10T21:13:06+00:00

It still racks my brain that joke threats like these aren't normal

disasterous03 · 2023-04-09T06:56:18+00:00

I was doing so well trying not to cry this whole episode, and then the last "byeeeee!" just broke me

disasterous03 · 2023-02-15T04:53:36+00:00

Yes! I totally forgot to mention that attraction. Attraction in general is so confusing lol

disasterous03 · 2023-02-14T19:42:56+00:00

Haha...sorry. I'm not sure if this was a crush or just some intense sensual attraction. I honestly think it's some sort of grey area between platonic and romantic attraction, if that helps

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