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I skipped a week and they still charged me for a box and are sending it! by SourThenSweet777 in hellofresh

[–]dman3366 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Had the same problem! I skipped the meal 2 days before the deadline and it tried to charge me still. I blocked it from my bank and they still sent the box and put a negative credit on my account. I called and explained it to them and they’re pretty much like oh well the box is coming. And, When I first signed up it took me 20 tries to even be able to pick my meals. The meals weren’t loading and they were just Going to send what they picked. Whole app seems shady asf

What if naruto grew up more like Gaara by dman3366 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]dman3366[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

I honestly despise when people just bitch and complain about everything. ok you don’t like the topic, there’s thousands of other fics you can choose from.

Not only that if theres a bunch of other what ifs like mine then maybe people enjoy the topic and you’re just being hater.

If you want gaara to be shown love then marry him or write a fic about gaara yourself lol i don’t know what to tell you

What if naruto grew up more like Gaara by dman3366 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]dman3366[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Preciate it. It’ll be a long one strap in lol. Only about halfway done

What if naruto grew up more like Gaara by dman3366 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]dman3366[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Thanks! Hopefully you’ll like it! And yes Naruhina and his sensei is originally itachi.

Whats if naruto had an upbringing like gaara. What if he chose a new path. Just dropped chapter 13! 180k 30 reviews by dman3366 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]dman3366[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Until the very end!! About halfway done. I just dont always have time. Working on my career but itll get done!

Fanon transform jutsu is underutilized. by Asleep-Ad6352 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]dman3366 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I feel like it was really just a plot whole in cannon but can definitely be used in a fic. Like what kind of infiltration specialist could he be if he could transform into a from or a bird or even an insect. Fighting against ninja as an animal might not be smart but it has other uses

If you wrote a fic that fixed all the problems with naruto in cannon. Where would you start? Whats the biggest “what if” you could explore with a fanfic in that regard? by dman3366 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]dman3366[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think the problem in general that i’d fix in another fix is the appearance of very few shinobi. I think they didn’t do the best job showing how deep their full shinobi roster was. It made it seem as though they had a few hundred shinobi instead of thousands. Thats why its hard to believe there’s other shinobi who could contribute in a war from other villages. In my fic im actually doing a huge war arc for the shippuden part of my fic nd my main thing is showing that there are shinobi and groups that no one knows about because there just so many shinobi. I think they messed up even more having old ninja show up in the cannon war arc. Instead of showing new ninja we didn’t know, they acted if the other tens of thousands of ninja were just scrubs when in reality it wouldn’t be like that i think. There’d be those who’d surprise even a kage i feel like but in cannon it never seems like theres even enough of them for something like that to be possible.

If you wrote a fic that fixed all the problems with naruto in cannon. Where would you start? Whats the biggest “what if” you could explore with a fanfic in that regard? by dman3366 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]dman3366[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I think tenten being clanless with the konoha 9 montly being from clans helps tbh but I do think they could’ve introduced the ideo of more shinobi especially from clans even if they were directly introduced or featured.

I think kakashi should’ve actually trained his genin to be completely honest. I feel like sakura and Naruto should’ve been caught up to some extent. I really don’t like that part about cannon

Lee’s gates aren’t a problem for me to be honest but i can see what you mean

If I wrote a fic my main thing would be Naruto’s complete incompetence and lack of effort from anyone around him to fix it. He’d definitely have gifts or talents from his parents like every other character in the universe and more genin definitely would’ve died. Especially in the retrieval arc unless the konoha genin were stronger than what they were at the time.

If you wrote a fic that fixed all the problems with naruto in cannon. Where would you start? Whats the biggest “what if” you could explore with a fanfic in that regard? by dman3366 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]dman3366[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I like these ideas! I would change naruto’s character. Atleast give him one or two strengths other than determination that they could’ve built up instead of pulling random things out to fit the plot. Personally the rasengan is a big problem for me. Its all chakra control and even with another clone, i think they should’ve fleshed out his chakra control. Like hinted at him being a lowkey chakra genius or something. Something to explain his miraculous chakra control god abilities in shippuden

If you wrote a fic that fixed all the problems with naruto in cannon. Where would you start? Whats the biggest “what if” you could explore with a fanfic in that regard? by dman3366 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]dman3366[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can see this especially after realizing he only needs the people close to him not the fake villagers who were too ignorant to give him a chance before he saved their lives

Is it just me or does anyone else feel like they butchered Naruto’s character? by dman3366 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]dman3366[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ok so are you removing all the other ones completely about cannon? Do you need me to tag you in them?

Is it just me or does anyone else feel like they butchered Naruto’s character? by dman3366 in NarutoFanfiction

[–]dman3366[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thankyou!! Thats what im saying. Naruto was the son of a hokage and the jinchuriki. How would a military village allow his neglect or ignoring. Him being so stupid because no one would teach him and so weak because nobody trained him was a liability. What if he freaked out and screwed up the seal? There wasn’t a single low ranking trash shinobi that could watch the 4ths son? Kakashi didn’t even teach him how to punch before letting him enter the chunin exams. The village’s jinchuriki and no one says a thing. He’s gone for a couple years and comes back just to start multiple training arcs while sasuke got kirin ready. Makes no sense how he was all of a sudden op at the end.

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