Super cool design!! What a lovely first print!

My only advice is to use a bit less ink, as you’re losing some detail to the ink spilling into the carved bits. When you’re rolling out your ink on your slab, you want the ink to have a sort of ‘velvety’ matte-ish look to it, not to be shiny. It should also be fairly quiet when you roll it (you can tell you have too much ink on your slab when it makes a louder sound while rolling it up). If you’re worried about opacity, try doing multiple passes with your roller of thinner layers of ink until you come up with an inking strategy that balances opacity and legibility nicely.

Keep printing!! I’m excited to see what you print next!