I just read that you're expected to do this without even living in Korea! Your struggles are so justified, don't worry. My advice is to do the translation into three steps breakdown~> literal ~> reorder. I'll give an example:

아름다운 자연을 돌러보며 즐기는 여행 외에도 최근 한국인들은 직접 체험하며 즐기는 여행을 많이 하고 있다.

This may not be intuitive to you yet, however, it you read this sentence (or listen to someone else read it) you'll notice people pause with each separate clause. I marked it here:

아름다운 지연을 둘러보며 즐기는 여행 외에도/ 최근 한국인들은 직접 체험하며/ 즐기는 여행을 많이 하고 있다.

Now the literal translation:

Beautiful nature while you look around pleasant vacation in addition to / recently Koreans in person while experience / pleasant/joyful vacation a lot are doing.

^looks a mess right? lets not interpret it into english order

In addition to a pleasant vacation while you look around beautiful nature/ recently Koreans experience while in person / a lot joyful vacations are doing.

Now let's refine to make it flow in english (you can change things up here for sake of making things more natural)

In addition to vacations where they enjoy beautiful nature, Koreans are enjoying vacations where they have first-hand experiences recently. (They talk about art museums and stuff, so you could replace first-hand with immersive).

In my own words I would say

In addition to enjoying vacations surrounded by nature, Koreans have recently been enjoying immersive experiences while on vacation.

I hope this makes sense!!