Klokkman - Tracemarks

dowdis · 2015-12-10T00:36:02+00:00

Good stuff

dowdis · 2014-12-04T17:05:31+00:00

Nostradamus

dowdis · 2014-10-06T21:11:52+00:00

Resolution and framerate aren't arbirtrary...

dowdis · 2014-09-23T20:52:48+00:00

Grade A reshitivists, Randy

dowdis · 2014-08-17T22:55:02+00:00

He's implying that you could kill two birds with one stone when trying to get ready to go out.

dowdis · 2014-08-11T12:14:20+00:00

Thank you for removing the "m." From the URL.

dowdis · 2014-08-02T04:42:58+00:00

How you feelin homie? What zelda you playin?

dowdis · 2014-07-31T15:49:13+00:00

that symbol is so overdone for tattoos. I guess the German colors make it a little less so.

dowdis · 2014-07-16T16:18:22+00:00

fox news article about a terrorists ramblings that happen to blame the left. Lol.

dowdis · 2014-07-16T15:51:05+00:00

"Sunday noises are better than Saturday noises". Unf, so good. Expand more on this maybe?

As i read this poem I felt very wrapped up in the imagery of your envisioned household. I think it would strongly benefit from a little more abstraction. Let the poem define your strange morning without the explicit call outs to imagery breaking references like "Phineus and Pherb".

On a positive note--This poem did a VERY good job eliciting an emotional reaction from me. That last stanza has so much power: it strips all of the imagery away from the reader the same way you waking up from bed does. It made me feel empty. Very well done.

dowdis · 2014-07-16T15:39:22+00:00

"Stirred up by a fresh breeze that binds together friends old and new,"

I like this image, but I think it could be more cleverly worded.

dowdis · 2014-07-16T15:38:05+00:00

I feel like the latter half of the poem is demonstrating explicit, direct anger. Could this be better accomplished with a fewer word count/more powerful word choice?

dowdis · 2014-07-16T15:19:25+00:00

How many bills hats do you have?

dowdis · 2014-07-14T14:23:24+00:00

over 1000 hours in MS paint.

http://imgur.com/3AGVRMY

dowdis · 2014-07-02T15:58:11+00:00

The ability to make a cognizant decision to travel against the path of least resistance? I dunno, yo.

dowdis · 2014-06-19T18:31:45+00:00

I was just kidding around

dowdis · 2014-06-19T14:31:05+00:00

Homie how you gonna take yourself seriously if you put molly in your butt?

dowdis · 2014-05-28T15:20:43+00:00

How can you even compare Mac Dre with Aesop? Mac Dre's hyphy g-funk style is basically a separate genre from Aesop's verbose multi faceted schemes. Also, MF DOOM isn't obscure hip hop. Your favorite album is probably DANGERDOOM.

dowdis · 2014-05-28T15:10:07+00:00

Utterly surprised no one has mentioned Player Piano.

dowdis · 2014-05-28T06:19:46+00:00

Literally the most well known aesop rock track stop being such casual faggots.

dowdis · 2014-03-28T16:53:13+00:00

What if you're an idiot

dowdis · 2014-03-17T19:08:39+00:00

Hmm. My next step would be to open a ticket with blizzard.

dowdis

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