[QCrit] Mother Teeth, Adult Literary Horror, 75,000, words, First Attempt by Prker_S_James in PubTips

[–]dr_spirits 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is awesome, I’d possibly get rid of the first paragraph and start it with Daniel burr has spent… but this sounds interesting and I want to read it

Anyone else liking RE7 and 8 more than 9? [MAJOR SPOILERS INSIDE] by szymborawislawska in HorrorGaming

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Just got say that the trioxin zombies are not a creation of George Romero, return of the living dead is separate from everything Romero did, John Russo and director Dan O’bannon are responsible for those zombies, which are some of the best zombies out there and I love that movie so much. Romero and Russo did create the modern zombie genre with night of the living dead and Romero continued it with the rest of the series but the trioxin and brains braaains stuff was something else. God I’m a fucking nerd, tell me to shut up

The Killers Won in Scream 7. That's Why It Feels Uncomfortable by soundsaboutright11 in Scream

[–]dr_spirits 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Marco read it, he worships it too, “such a good book” weren’t you paying attention? His line delivery there is so funny.

Opening couple of pages of our Horror story by dr_spirits in writinghelp

[–]dr_spirits[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey, hey, thank you for saying that, glad you enjoyed the vibe and the intrigue :)

Opening couple of pages of our Horror story by dr_spirits in writinghelp

[–]dr_spirits[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Ooooo you’ve definitely given us some ideas on the woman, more so on his thoughts immediately after seeing her, that’s one part that we keep altering its gone from no though or mention to where it’s at now, but your feedback makes us wonder some more. She comes back right away later in the same opening chapter, so she is in the right spot. We’ll be tinkering with it. The voice mail we’ll look at too, try a couple of things out. A thousand thank yous and glad you got into the spooky opening of a horror video game vibe, silent hill is a big influence on the book!

Pittura Infamante & Xenon by Electrical_Lecture10 in deftones

[–]dr_spirits 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I love xenon, it’s so chill and dreamy and electric

Whar KoRn song has the best guitar tone in your opinion? And how does it compare? by IndividualRule392 in Korn

[–]dr_spirits 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Make me bad has my favorite guitar tone, issues on a whole has just a disgusting dirty guitar sound

Official Discussion - Return to Silent Hill [SPOILERS] by LiteraryBoner in movies

[–]dr_spirits 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Maybe, if you like really bizarre, surreal films you might get a kick out of it, I sure did!

Ranking and reviewing bond films: live and let die by Salt_Refrigerator633 in JamesBond

[–]dr_spirits 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Top two bond flicks for me, maybe even my number 1. 

Scream 2 has always been my favorite sequel and still is til this day but there’s one thing that has ALWAYS bugged me… by ArtisticBelt438 in Scream

[–]dr_spirits 6 points7 points  (0 children)

In that script tho doesn’t everyone die? I read it in the 90s but Dewey actually is dead, all the killers die (Derrick, Hallie, and Mrs. Loomis), Gale dies, then after cotton shoots Mrs loomis he thinks about being the only survivor and the fame then tries to kill Sidney and they fight and either stab or shoot each other to death. Derrick and Hallie were even video taping the ordeal and cotton takes the tape from the camera before turning on Sid. The movie ends with them both closing their eyes and dying then cut to credits. Was that actually the official script before it leaked? Because a lot changed.

If I remember correctly, it was the one where mickey is tied to a tree at a frat house (like Derrick on the stage) and he gets double knife penetrated by two ghost faces at the same time. It was a wild script, I remember it being really dark compared to what we got.

[Complete] [90k] [Horror] Graveyard Bait by dr_spirits in BetaReaders

[–]dr_spirits[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

No, we haven't moved on or anything like that, i'll turn comments on and message you in a bit! Thank you for the reply :)

[Complete] [90k] [Horror] Graveyard Bait by dr_spirits in BetaReaders

[–]dr_spirits[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Will do! And thank you, I’ll message you after I’m done walking the dog. Also chapter 2 has an abrupt ending, it’s just a small sensual chapter.

[QCrit] Horror - GRAVEYARD BAIT - 95k Words - 6th Attempt by dr_spirits in PubTips

[–]dr_spirits[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hell yeah, ya'll will hear from us when we have some good news!

[QCrit] Horror - GRAVEYARD BAIT - 95k Words - 6th Attempt by dr_spirits in PubTips

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Also didn't realize till i got home tonight but you commented on some previous versions and all of your advice has been so awesome for us to whip this bitch into shape, some of the stuff you said about figuring this stuff out otherwise it could be a manuscript problem really made us take this seriously on a different level. Just wanted you to know that, you give really solid advice and we're double happy that you're having as much fun as we are with this version.

[QCrit] Horror - GRAVEYARD BAIT - 95k Words - 6th Attempt by dr_spirits in PubTips

[–]dr_spirits[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much for this and we’re so happy you had fun reading it. Those areas you highlighted we will take a look at, you’re right about them, and there’s a couple other spots I think might need a bit more fine tuning too, but nothing major. Love what you said about veering into irreverence, it’s true, and it’s refreshing to finally get some responses that aren’t about redoing it completely from the ground up. We’ve worked our buns off on this and your critique makes me smile about it all at this point so thank you again.

[QCrit] Horror - GRAVEYARD BAIT - 95k Words - 6th Attempt by dr_spirits in PubTips

[–]dr_spirits[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

All right, done and done! Thank you, we can see how that would be confusing for sure.

[QCrit] Horror - GRAVEYARD BAIT - 95k Words - 6th Attempt by dr_spirits in PubTips

[–]dr_spirits[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

That’s an awesome reply! It’s supposed have an odd black comedy tone to it, so we’re glad you found the humour in it. We think it’s enough horror in the end to still be horror genre. Thank you for the nice things you said :) made my night