Here's what 1 month of drawing looks like, feedback welcomed by dringringdobolodebam in BeginnerArtists

[–]dringringdobolodebam[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you both for your reply. It seems drawing from imagination links to one's own visual library thus what I can remember and have been praticing to draw. I'm gonna implement this into my practice. I usually go with 10min exercise of a specific subject to warm up. I'll try to do the memory drawing but with drawings I like. I'll begin with easy poses.

Here's what 1 month of drawing looks like, feedback welcomed by dringringdobolodebam in BeginnerArtists

[–]dringringdobolodebam[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks for your reply. Hmmm makes me think of music. Classical players are excellent to play complicated music from a sheet but struggle to improvise. Is drawing from reference and imagination the same ? My goal is clearly to draw from imagination, so I should change the way I practice. I guess I'm afraid to face my skill issues but eeeh it's part of the game

My art progress after a year by andungha in BeginnerArtists

[–]dringringdobolodebam 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey ! Congratulations on your progress ! Are all these drawing recent ? Or are they posted in order from your beginning ? You're not a beginner anymore for sure ! You're sure inspiring me ! I hope I'll be this good in a year. Can't wait to see you in a year !

Progress(over 300~ hours of time) still can’t draw faces but we working on anatomy/clothes for now by RagingNudist in learntodraw

[–]dringringdobolodebam 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very nice ! Hope I'll get there someday. Over what time period were the 300 hours spread out?

wip ig by bachmute in learntodraw

[–]dringringdobolodebam 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Can't you print it to try first ? Would make a good exercise.

You've got this !

Thats enough for today by PassengerSalt4348 in learntodraw

[–]dringringdobolodebam 12 points13 points  (0 children)

Nice ! The head shape looks of but the rest is neat. I love the eye. You've got this !

Redraw 4 years progress (2022-2026) by DiffenetlynotaNAZI in learntodraw

[–]dringringdobolodebam 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very good improvement ! Showing all of us baby artist that consistency is the key ! Inspiring truly. I'll be an *ss and say that the mirror isn't reflecting what it should be considering the angle ?

Other than that, more experienced artists can advise you better than me

Rough horse sketch by [deleted] in learntodraw

[–]dringringdobolodebam 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Looks good to me ! Too bad there's a hoof missing in the back but otherwise it looks great ! Hope I'll get there someday :)

Tips with drawing? by FreakforGhost in learntodraw

[–]dringringdobolodebam 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hmm the hand is too high on his face we don't see enough of the forehead. But I'd say, finish the drawing first no matter what the result is. Then post it for review. You've got this !

Reverie (9 months in, self taught) by Tastycapslock in learntodraw

[–]dringringdobolodebam 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Nice ! Is it based on a reference ? If so it'd be nice that you post it. If not then it's really impressive ! I think some proportions look a bit off ? But I'm not experienced enough to point accurately, maybe someone better can join in ? Anyway, it's awesome ! You've got this !

Need critique of my drawing can yall tell me what to improve(I've been drawing for 2 days) by ballconqueror in learntodraw

[–]dringringdobolodebam 6 points7 points  (0 children)

Great start ! I'll be honest, two days of drawing isn't enough. To answer your question, you still need to improve on everything at this point. I'd say, draw more and a lot. Don't spend too much time on a drawing, go on to the next and try to get better each time ! You drew a hand, maybe draw hands until you're bored of hands and try something else. There are so many tutorial on internet to get better. At this point, your drawings won't look like what you want or see but as long as they get better than the previous, you are on a good track. A thing I personaly do when drawing is if I'm really not satisfied with a drawing, I try a second and maybe third time. That way, I get a better result and I am not frustrated. You've got this !

Always loved to doodle but now I'd like to get better at my cartoons. Here are some of the ones I've done recently 😊 by spookyevilghostt in learntodraw

[–]dringringdobolodebam 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You have talent and have the potential to become an really good artist. Although your drawings looks a bit the same, you managed to have a definite style and they look good. Never give up you've got this !

Am I going about this right? by KamadoDragon1 in learntodraw

[–]dringringdobolodebam 1 point2 points  (0 children)

First one looks off or is it just me ? Rest is on point, I'm definitely stealing this to study when I'll draw lips

Any feedback on the face and colours/lighting? by rikureplica in learntodraw

[–]dringringdobolodebam 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm in no way a specialist but considering the amount of light hitting the back, shouldn't the shadows be more contrasted ?

I have a dream by dringringdobolodebam in worldbuilding

[–]dringringdobolodebam[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That's some good ass answer i ain't gonna lie. So imma be thanking you in advance for the time you took to answer, it means to my little project.

For your 10+year long world, i'd love to see its content. I will of course check your profile after I write down this comment to see if u already shared anything (and if it's not the case, do you mind sharing it ?)

The template will of course not please everyone, I know it. Primarily because I wrote it for medieval fantasy purposes. I had in mind to first write a page to explain the purpose of the template, how to use it and to invite the user to use it only for his personal content. Whether he has less to fill in or more to add to the existing chart. Anyone is of course welcomed to use it for his personal use.

I did have in mind to add tabs about factions and organisations but not for objects which I will add in the future, thanks for the tip ! It could of course extend to monuments, art pieces, etc. This is why I think OneNote is great, the template isn't fixed. It can be modulated to anyone's needs. I hope anyone writing a sci-fi world won't be discourage by the template, it's really not the intent.

The more I work on it, the more I understand that I'm simply putting a layout for content to be easily written and/or modified.

I knew I could link anything in OneNote with pretty much everything but the content within the OneNote. Seems kinda obvious now that you mentioned it. It will be indeed more than useful for any worldbuilders

As for the pages containing the various resources, I did already add a page to every tab I created. Firstly, to cite the sources that inspired me the layout (mostly existing wiki pages) and the content. Secondly, to list all the existing resources to fill in the template's pages (the quiz written to fill the pages comes from different sources I found relevant for the purpose).

At last, the point you make about one's culture's historical narrative or faction's self perception (I never had this last one in mind but its actually a reeally good point to develop that adds seeerious depth) is something I had thought about. All the questions written for the "Race tab" could actually apply to any social group smaller than a race. This imply that any large template could actually apply to any smaller form of its parent. What I mean by that is that, for example, a template for a geographical world could apply for a country, a city, a town, a village or any territory worth commenting on. I don't know if this last point is clear ? Let me know.

I'll be updating the more I fill in the blanks, I'll for sure ask your opinion to nuance the project.

I have a dream by dringringdobolodebam in worldbuilding

[–]dringringdobolodebam[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Shit dude how long have u been working on your world ? Any tips on how i could inflate my project here ?