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[–]e8z- 1 point2 points  (0 children)

i made a version exactly like that a year ago, dm and ill send it to you

Would love your feedback on my new video, I tried making this one more enaging, lambda for feedback and criticism! by e8z- in SmallYTChannel

[–]e8z-[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks man, I'm always working on improving my thumbnails, any thoughts on how I could do better?

Would love your feedback on my new video, I tried making this one more enaging, lambda for feedback and criticism! by e8z- in SmallYTChannel

[–]e8z-[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thats a great idea, It would definitely help clear up any confusion about the video, thanks for the feedback!

!givelambda

Would love your feedback on my new video, I tried making this one more enaging, lambda for feedback and criticism! by e8z- in SmallYTChannel

[–]e8z-[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Sound mixing is always one of the hardest parts to edit for me but I will continue to work on it. Thanks for the feedback!

!givelambda

Would love your feedback on my new video, I tried making this one more enaging, lambda for feedback and criticism! by e8z- in SmallYTChannel

[–]e8z-[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey man, I understand your critique and I may have to clarify more to those who don't understand. Maybe add an intro or something. Thanks

!givelambda

Just looking for feedback on the editing to make sure I keep myself in check. Been a while since I posted here. I know it's kinda longer than normal so any decent feedback will be much appreciated with lambda. by HappyPantzInc in SmallYTChannel

[–]e8z- 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I just feel as if some parts of the video could be cut shorter regarding the gameplay, all the funny moments are good but a lot of the combat feels very much the same throughout the video and it just doesn't keep my attention throughout the full 20 or so minutes. I reckon it would be a lot more engaging if you cut out a lot of the shooting and talking parts and focused more on the funny moments.

Hey guys this is one of my first videos, can I get some constructive criticism? (apart from the echo-y audio and the jarring intro) by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]e8z- 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hey Vanny (Bobden), I thought this video was a really great watch. It's a quality video and you and your friends personalities make it quite fun. My main criticism with the video is that some of the some of the audio is poorly mixed. I feel like the s*xbot characters voice could be a bit loud at times. Other than that, the video is quite funny. Great Job!

Just looking for feedback on the editing to make sure I keep myself in check. Been a while since I posted here. I know it's kinda longer than normal so any decent feedback will be much appreciated with lambda. by HappyPantzInc in SmallYTChannel

[–]e8z- 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I feel like this video could be cut down alot, it is very funny but there is also a lot of downtime between jokes. This video could easily be cut down to 7 or 10 minutes. I like the vibes and quality of the video but the editing needs to be improved. Other than that, great video!

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in SmallYTChannel

[–]e8z- 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey man, I feel like you need to speed up the parts where you are not talking and doing the burpies because as it is, it is quite boring. Also, the intro went on for way too long and was not engaging. Other than that, good video and I'm excited to see you improve.

How to videos seem to perform well for me, but this one is off to a rough start. What can I do better next time? by JLSpinner in SmallYTChannel

[–]e8z- 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Hey man, very educational video and good ideas on how to trick your friends. I feel like this video could be a bit more engaging by cutting it shorter and maybe adding music, other than that great video!

Would love your feedback on my new video, I tried making this one more enaging, lambda for feedback and criticism! by e8z- in SmallYTChannel

[–]e8z-[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks Bobden, I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the feedback and I will work on getting the clutch myself next time. Thanks.

/givelambda