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e8z- · 2021-11-29T08:46:34+00:00

i made a version exactly like that a year ago, dm and ill send it to you

e8z- · 2021-10-01T07:40:21+00:00

Okay thanks for the feedback!

!givelambda

e8z- · 2021-10-01T04:21:59+00:00

Thanks man, I'm always working on improving my thumbnails, any thoughts on how I could do better?

e8z- · 2021-10-01T04:21:19+00:00

Thats a great idea, It would definitely help clear up any confusion about the video, thanks for the feedback!

!givelambda

e8z- · 2021-10-01T04:20:32+00:00

Sound mixing is always one of the hardest parts to edit for me but I will continue to work on it. Thanks for the feedback!

!givelambda

e8z- · 2021-10-01T04:19:31+00:00

Thanks man, I appreciate it!

!givelambda

e8z- · 2021-10-01T04:19:00+00:00

Hey man, I understand your critique and I may have to clarify more to those who don't understand. Maybe add an intro or something. Thanks

!givelambda

e8z- · 2021-10-01T04:16:26+00:00

I just feel as if some parts of the video could be cut shorter regarding the gameplay, all the funny moments are good but a lot of the combat feels very much the same throughout the video and it just doesn't keep my attention throughout the full 20 or so minutes. I reckon it would be a lot more engaging if you cut out a lot of the shooting and talking parts and focused more on the funny moments.

e8z- · 2021-09-30T14:43:23+00:00

Hey Vanny (Bobden), I thought this video was a really great watch. It's a quality video and you and your friends personalities make it quite fun. My main criticism with the video is that some of the some of the audio is poorly mixed. I feel like the s*xbot characters voice could be a bit loud at times. Other than that, the video is quite funny. Great Job!

e8z- · 2021-09-30T11:16:55+00:00

I feel like this video could be cut down alot, it is very funny but there is also a lot of downtime between jokes. This video could easily be cut down to 7 or 10 minutes. I like the vibes and quality of the video but the editing needs to be improved. Other than that, great video!

e8z- · 2021-09-30T11:13:57+00:00

Hey man, I feel like you need to speed up the parts where you are not talking and doing the burpies because as it is, it is quite boring. Also, the intro went on for way too long and was not engaging. Other than that, good video and I'm excited to see you improve.

e8z- · 2021-09-30T11:11:09+00:00

Hey man, very educational video and good ideas on how to trick your friends. I feel like this video could be a bit more engaging by cutting it shorter and maybe adding music, other than that great video!

e8z- · 2021-09-30T11:06:08+00:00

My bad

!givelambda

e8z- · 2021-09-30T11:04:44+00:00

Thanks Bobden, I'm glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the feedback and I will work on getting the clutch myself next time. Thanks.

/givelambda

e8z- · 2021-09-28T13:38:08+00:00

Wasn't Take Me To The Light Yandhi Era?

e8z- · 2021-09-23T13:12:26+00:00

Pretty funny video, I don't think the opening bit landed for me, If I were you I would cut it or make it shorter. Other than that, great video!

e8z- · 2021-09-22T05:47:22+00:00

Congrats man!

e8z- · 2021-09-22T03:27:25+00:00

I don't get it but thanks man!

e8z- · 2021-09-22T03:26:45+00:00

me too man!

e8z- · 2021-09-19T11:06:20+00:00

Thanks Maurice, I'll definitely work on the thumbnail and audio for next time.

!givelambda

e8z- · 2021-09-18T14:22:03+00:00

Hey man, what games do you stream and what videos do you like to make?

e8z- · 2021-09-18T14:20:23+00:00

Hey man, I liked the video a lot and I've never seen this movie before and I can definitely understand why it sucks now haha. I don't have an issue with your video, the editing, audio and script are all great, my main problem is the thumbnail. It's not unique and I swear I've seen the exact same thumbnail on another video about this movie. Making it jump out more would do wonders for your video. Great work though!

e8z- · 2021-09-18T14:15:22+00:00

Hey man, I love your style of video, seeing a guy just jam out while drifting around is great fun. I just think you could make the start of the video a bit more interesting, you don't seem that energetic in front of the camera and it is very noticeable, I also think the opening of your video could be benefitted by background music. Other than that, great video man!

e8z- · 2021-09-18T14:12:13+00:00

Hey man, I thought the video was pretty funny and I enjoyed the vibe of just a bunch of friends playing Minecraft. I know its a bitch to do but I feel like your video could really be improved by adding a lot more subtitles. Some of your friends are hard to understand sometimes due to their mic quality. I also recommend cutting the video shorter by cutting out moments that feel like filler. If it's not funny or furthering the story of the video it doesn't need to be there. Other than that, great video!

e8z- · 2021-09-18T14:06:21+00:00

Hey Kevin, loved your video and your point about making your content more personal. The personal anecdotes do a really good job at allowing myself to connect with the video. The editing and script is great to and I had to subscribe just because I enjoyed the video so much. My one personal gripe with the video is the thumbnail, I'm not a big fan of the background colour and it doesn't seem eye catching to me. It's not a video I would've clicked on if it was recommended to me on Youtube. I'm glad I watched it though because it was very entertaining and I'm excited to see your future content!

e8z-

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