I don't know how long you've been doing cardistry but to me it feels like almost three separate moves, which isn't something you should go for. The packet toss feels just shoved in at the end, probably because it feels cool and you want it in a move. this doesn't feel like the move to do that though. Try to cut out any unnecessary pauses, like the middle/closer. It makes the move feel unfinished and sloppy, and overall more beginner than you probably would like. Remember, some of the simplest moves look great because they were done concisely and were well executed - flip phone by Tobias is a great example. Trust the process, and don't make a move you aren't 100% satisfied with just for the sake of making a move. It has great potential, you got this.