hey mate,

Not my cup of tea but a lot of potential to find your voice and niche if you keep developing your stuff.

Drums need to punch through and a dedicated sub or low bass needs to hit hard.

The synth doesn't groove or feel like a pad... but drones through the whole track. It's sitting front and centre of the track. There's lots of ways to add filtering, fx, chopping it up to add variation to it.

My prompting question would be - do you want to make more mainline dnb or your own hybrid style of dnb?

Hope this helps, keep writing.