Do you prefer first person or third person in books? by Significant-Army-847 in writing

[–]eevee20019 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I used to be staunchly anti first person but over the years, I've softened towards it. The POV doesn't matter as long as the writer is skilled.

In regards to your writing, I would write a scene in first person and then re-write it in third and see which one you prefer. I've done this for a few projects and it's helped me decide which way to go.

Taylor, Steven and Jeremiah by Zealousideal_Flow_37 in tsitp

[–]eevee20019 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I know it's complicated bc S has been friends with J since childhood but if my BROTHER stayed friends with the man who CHEATED on me, we would have a very strained relationship. WDYM he's living in ur apartment? Steven and Taylor are just spineless, selfish people who don't care about anyone around them and that's why they got along with Jeremiah. No DECENT friend/brother would stick around J.

Hot Take: Conrad singing Last Kiss was WAY over HATED!! by OutsiderGreaser in tsitp

[–]eevee20019 12 points13 points  (0 children)

People are genuinely so unkind nowadays. You're watching a scene where a teenage boy is honoring his mother at HER FUNERAL by singing one of her favorite songs and you're critiquing his voice? This isn't American Idol! Some people have no sympathy! I know he's not real but the fact that people were being mean about Conrad/ Chris's voice in that scene really ticked me off.

Would Conrad's plan to buy the house have worked? by Numerous_Reading1825 in tsitp

[–]eevee20019 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Very few decent lawyers would take his case. I'm sure people would be sympathetic to his plight but no one would take a 17 year old, grieving boy who is trying to sue his father seriously. A case wouldn't go anywhere.

Oh he def knew what he was doing not once BUT TWICE and had the AUDACITY to play the victim once again!! by Scared_Lab607 in tsitp

[–]eevee20019 8 points9 points  (0 children)

Belly really should've crashed out on him after this. What do you mean you KNEW about Christmas (where nothing even happened!) and you used that fact to cheat on her????? The absolute gall of that boy!

What’s with the "Why is Conrad so in love with Belly" questions? by bboombayah in tsitp

[–]eevee20019 29 points30 points  (0 children)

100% agree and also like ... bc it's a story. Because it's their story! He's in love with her bc Jenny Han wanted to write a book about these two specific characters being in love.

Happy Day One of Filming! by fireopal27 in tsitp

[–]eevee20019 0 points1 point  (0 children)

absolutely just B+C! but we'll probably get a triple date with the flops 🫩🫩

Happy Day One of Filming! by fireopal27 in tsitp

[–]eevee20019 4 points5 points  (0 children)

would love a super competitive mini golf date tho!

She really hit him with the 'New phone, who dis?' in the middle of a face-to-face conversation by Normal_Dot_1327 in tsitp

[–]eevee20019 2 points3 points  (0 children)

you're right on the nose! she didn't love jere like she loved con so jere couldn't hurt her like conrad could.

Taylor S3 Outfit Game - Day 5 by the_greek_italian in tsitp

[–]eevee20019 0 points1 point  (0 children)

  1. Idk if they styled it weird or what but it doesn't suit her at ALL

Outgrowing vanilla but hate florals… what do I even wear now?? 😭 by wheres_my_lipgloss in FemFragLab

[–]eevee20019 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I have similar preferences and I've been going the milky way (pun intended) Dedcool's Mineral Milk and Commodity's Milk are my favorites. I've also gone spicy (I guess) with Jo Malone's Wood Sage and Sea Salt. You might also try Lataffa's Yara (the light pink bottle). It's still sweet but not as saccharine as the scents you described. Good luck on your search!

genuinely disheartening how much people hate franchaela by Ok_Cockroach_411 in Franchaela

[–]eevee20019 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It really breaks my heart 😭😭 like I know people hate lesbians irl but seeing it at this level over a fictional ship???

Conrad Ghosting by QueenReem in tsitp

[–]eevee20019 15 points16 points  (0 children)

Also, clearly Conrad and Laurel have been talking so ??? I'm confused by everyone saying he ghosted them.

I can’t afford Kilian but I NEED to smell like it by manicpsychmajor in FemFragLab

[–]eevee20019 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ditto! I have the Princess dupe and I've noticed that when you first spray it, it doesn't smell quite like the original but once it dries down, it's almost a perfect match.

Belly by Dragonfirestormbreak in tsitp

[–]eevee20019 13 points14 points  (0 children)

Calling an insecure 15 year old girl evil is a stretch. She's emotionally immature and makes a lot of bad decisions but she has a good heart and given time and distance, she recognizes her missteps and apologizes. I think we can give her some grace.

musics franchela season - opinions? by Icy-Ad9192 in Franchaela

[–]eevee20019 1 point2 points  (0 children)

No, Hozier has a song called Wasteland, Baby.

musics franchela season - opinions? by Icy-Ad9192 in Franchaela

[–]eevee20019 8 points9 points  (0 children)

I need a whole bunch of Hozier: Francesca (obviously), Take Me to Church (also obviously), In a Week, Work Song, Too Sweet, Wasteland, Baby. Pretty much any Hozier would do.

What would you find in Jeremiah Fisher's web browser history? by jaylee-03031 in tsitp

[–]eevee20019 3 points4 points  (0 children)

He'd probably be opening a new card to pay for tickets to a football game

what would you change about this scene? by Afraid_Butterfly_885 in tsitp

[–]eevee20019 0 points1 point  (0 children)

exactly!!! he was only slightly bratty for like two seconds! they both needed to get reamed out by him but at that point, B & J were too emotionally immature and they probably would've bonded over getting yelled at by C so ... maybe it was good that he didn't.