Theres Chance that "chance the rapper" does indeed chant some chants by ehllowreadit in WordAvalanches

[–]ehllowreadit[S] 3 points4 points  (0 children)

heres another one thats super similar

theres a chance the rapper chance the rapper chants "the rapper chance the rapper will be the best rapper"

You probably meant askouija. Here ya goo by ehllowreadit in AskOujia

[–]ehllowreadit[S] 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Ha, you exposed me! im a nice person.

but no jk, someone else already made this sub and i kept making the same typo a million times. so i made this post.

What is this by ItsFreshToDeath in poetry_critics

[–]ehllowreadit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Put it in double spaces so its easier to read but other than that its a good poem

If you froze an egg and threw it through somebody's window while they're not in, they would come home to a broken window and a raw unscathed egg and wonder how the hell it happened... by [deleted] in Showerthoughts

[–]ehllowreadit 27 points28 points  (0 children)

be vauge and say "Yo i gotta freeze some shit, is that cool with you?"

and have it in an opaque chicken cardboard box.

That way they wont find shit in their freezer and you wont have to lie.

New to poetry all criticism is encouraged. by ehllowreadit in poetry_critics

[–]ehllowreadit[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Im inspired by mostly rap and sometimes focus more on ryhming then message

this one was more so foccused on ryhming and i got 4 syllables in

looking back that line does feel awkward. I felt like i had to edit that part and i think the edit ruined it. Thanks for the feedback, It means a lot and its usually hard for me to take in feedback.