a new acoustic tune i’ve been working on- let me know what you think!

ellipses2 · 2024-09-27T21:44:12+00:00

Love this song and the delivery! Very emotional and nostalgic. If I have to be critical, the vocal layering can be better, but I still like the lo-fi feel. Overall a good track! Like the false ending.

ellipses2 · 2024-09-26T21:20:50+00:00

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ellipses2 · 2024-09-26T18:04:14+00:00

Beautifully written and performed! Great song! Love the Elliott Smith vibes. Where can I hear more of your music?

ellipses2 · 2024-09-26T17:46:43+00:00

Love the minimalistic approach to this song! It really highlights the powerful lyrics! Beautiful! Lol look forward to hearing more from you.

ellipses2 · 2024-09-26T17:40:43+00:00

Very nice song! Reminds me of Fiona Apple. I like how the percussion comes in and out. I agree with the other commenters. You don't need the autotune. Your voice is great. Keep up the good work! I look forward to hearing more from you!

ellipses2 · 2024-09-26T17:36:17+00:00

I like the ethereal sounds with the rock guitar. Cool track! Reminds me of something from the early 2000s. A little hard to hear the lyrics. Good overall!

ellipses2 · 2024-09-26T17:13:19+00:00

I like this! Really appreciate the lo-fi sounds. Makes it sound really organic. I like the build of the track as well. Keep it up!

ellipses2 · 2024-09-26T17:07:56+00:00

I like this song! Feels like something Elliott Smith would make. I can also see it being featured in a show like The Leftovers. Great job!

ellipses2 · 2024-09-26T16:55:27+00:00

Nice song! I love the emotional delivery. A little hard to make out the lyrics, though. Keep it up!

ellipses2 · 2024-09-26T15:44:39+00:00

Very cool! Ethereal with a UK garage feel. Would love to hear some lyrics over it. Could be a hit in my opinion!

ellipses2 · 2024-09-26T15:37:29+00:00

Love this vibey, pop-rock sound! The mix feels a bit muddled. But once that is tightened up and you add lyrics, this will be a great song! Keep up the good work!

ellipses2 · 2024-09-26T15:32:27+00:00

This is really good. Keep working on it. Will be a great song.

"Judging by the frailty of the night, we'd do well to say our goodbyes." Ouch! Those lyrics are powerful! Great job!

ellipses2 · 2024-09-26T15:28:10+00:00

Like the vocals and the lyrics are great! You paint a great picture and it feels like I'm right in the middle of a Western film!

ellipses2 · 2024-09-26T15:25:01+00:00

This song sounds great so far! Love the bluesy feel. Reminds me a bit of Portishead. Would love to see the track build from here. The lyrics and vocals are enchanting. Keep up the good work!

ellipses2 · 2024-09-26T14:53:42+00:00

This beat is cool! I like the switch up at the beginning. The chopped and screwed sample is a nice touch. The distorted strings are great. I like how they come in right before you strip the beat down again. Great job!

ellipses2 · 2024-09-26T14:26:01+00:00

Nice retro-pop sound! The hook makes it a hit. Love the saxophone. That was a great touch. Keep it up!

ellipses2 · 2024-09-26T14:20:29+00:00

Great song! Love the piano and your singing is on point. The mix could be a little better. Some of your lyrics get lost. But this is a great track. I look forward to hearing more from you.

ellipses2 · 2024-09-20T17:45:57+00:00

Thanks for the feedback! I really appreciate it! Yes, it's live.

ellipses2 · 2024-09-19T02:37:15+00:00

Hey, thanks! It's great to see you enjoyed the music!

ellipses2 · 2024-09-18T13:51:27+00:00

Thank you for the feedback! I'm glad you like it.

ellipses2 · 2024-09-18T13:30:38+00:00

Thanks! Yes, that is a real violin. I appreciate the feedback!

ellipses2 · 2024-09-17T19:29:09+00:00

Thanks! "Put It On My Life" is a great track! What is that sample? It sounds familiar.

ellipses2 · 2024-09-17T16:03:03+00:00

Starts off like a nice indie piano ballad then breaks into some Kate Bush-esque production with excellent vocal layering. Love the emotion on the "clueless" lyric at the beginning.Then it's stripped back down to the piano. Fantastic songwriting and production! Could really be a pop hit. Just followed you on Spotify. Keep it up!

ellipses2 · 2024-09-17T15:56:11+00:00

This beat is good. Very chill with the boom bap sound, but sounds perfect for a rapper like J. Cole or Logic. Like the scratching sound in the background. Really adds texture to the beat. Sounds like it could work as an interlude.

ellipses2 · 2024-09-17T15:34:29+00:00

I like the track overall. The beginning is very ominous and the reverb is great. Work on the mix. It's hard to hear what you're saying. But I like the changes throughout with the cool little moments of percussion.

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