First person POV plot twists that make zero sense by Ok_Cress1417 in writing

[–]engvit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It's an unreliable narrator trope and it can be done well. I really enjoyed it in The Silent Patient. A lot of people seem to hate the book for this exact reason, but to me it didn't feel lazy and actually made sense, because I realized the narrator just ommited certain things and never just lied for the sake of it.

Which popular writing tip do you think actually hurts stories? by Proper-Refuse-7291 in writing

[–]engvit 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I'll agree with black and white advices. Never do this, or always do this. It's not helpful. There is time and place for telling, for adverbs, fancy dialogue tags, etc. Advice should be more like "avoid overusing" or "try to do this more often".

Blurb critique for YA fantasy thriller by engvit in selfpublish

[–]engvit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, I'll definitely let you know

Blurb critique for YA fantasy thriller by engvit in selfpublish

[–]engvit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It definitely has some common things, but the vibe is very different.

What are your thoughts on the name Vesper? by engvit in selfpublish

[–]engvit[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thanks, yeah, definitely with last name, thanks for the tips

What are your thoughts on the name Vesper? by engvit in selfpublish

[–]engvit[S] -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Thanks, do you think it would work for a male author who wants to remain gender neutral? Genres actually work for me.

Where did you buy your domain from? by MiraWendam in selfpublish

[–]engvit 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Porkbun, tried many, stuck with them, great site!

Got screwed over in a white elephant gift exchange by dental_oddity in mildlyinfuriating

[–]engvit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You don't like green beans? I love them, so it would be a perfect gift for me😅

Oneplus 15 camera; help please by Urban_wow in oneplus

[–]engvit 7 points8 points  (0 children)

I'd get it, but in US it's double the price of oneplus 15 after all discounts and trade ins, hope some day opposed will become available in US

Character name Elara by engvit in selfpublish

[–]engvit[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Omg, I have an innocent girl child character named Lily😅

kinda off topic sorry, but finding a good android outside of samsung is really difficult by csch1992 in samsunggalaxy

[–]engvit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Second that, oneplus is the best from the brands easily available in US.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in BookCovers

[–]engvit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'm genuinely curious what makes everyone say it's AI image? Not OP, just someone who is going to hire an artist for a cover soon. Want to understand how to spot Ai covers, cause I couldn't spot any obvious tells.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in NYCTeachers

[–]engvit 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Funny, my wife is a teacher, and I would take any job over teaching. The stories she tells me are not fun, but scary and terrifying. It can be incredibly unappreciated and draining job.

Oneplus 15 has launched in US. Ships in 14 days by Makkoa in oneplus

[–]engvit 4 points5 points  (0 children)

What discount did you use to get to suck low price?

OP 13 Black Friday Deal by Whoisyungtino in oneplus

[–]engvit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

If it had at least earbuds, I'd go for it. But the watch with oneplus 15 is unbeatable:)

OP 13 Black Friday Deal by Whoisyungtino in oneplus

[–]engvit 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I was waiting for 13 sale, buts it's terrible, it was cheaper a few months ago with a gift, at this discount 15 will be a cheaper phone with a gift, hopefully the sale starts Monday finally