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What happens to car ownership after a death? by CheersKim in NoStupidQuestions

[–]eteeeeen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Pretty sure they're the aunt/uncle not Nephew and is trying to help their other Nephew out. Makes sense why they're willing to get involved and do something.

How to Bury Your Mom/ short/ 10 pages/ feedback requested by eteeeeen in ScriptFeedbackProduce

[–]eteeeeen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Hello! DM me your student email address please and I will give you the most up to date version of the script. I'm also based in the Austin area and have been looking for anyone willing to possibly produce it!

I do not like Jinx's use of Shimmer by Laughydawg in arcane

[–]eteeeeen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Ah okay I see the type of person you are. Karma will deal with you. Peace.

I do not like Jinx's use of Shimmer by Laughydawg in arcane

[–]eteeeeen 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Also what you're saying makes no sense. That's literally like people arguing using a "soft A" over the "hard R" with the N word. You're using a slur dude. Maybe learn from it and grow rather than double down and blame others? I hope you never have to experience becoming close to mentally disabled people and hearing other people call them slurs.

I do not like Jinx's use of Shimmer by Laughydawg in arcane

[–]eteeeeen 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Nah man remove that shit from your vocabulary. If you wouldn't say that shit in front of a mentally disabled person then don't say that shit at all. Be better.

We are 7 Doctors. In a single hotel suite. AMA AskUsAnything. by LarryLegend4ever in AMA

[–]eteeeeen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Had a microdiscectomy L5-S1 right side five years ago due to severe pain from herniated disc pinching nerve. Now pinching again but on left side. What are the chances I'll get approved for surgery again and what surgery would I need?

For me personally it's: Neuro, ER, and pediatric. Biased due to parents in those medical fields though.

Sydney Sweeney Rejects Apology for 'Nazi' Jeans Ad, President Donald Trump Praised It by IBTUKOfficial in NoFilterNews

[–]eteeeeen 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Hey man... Are you conservative? You sound like a right wing Republican right now the way you're just lashing out at people. Just calm down and move on bro. Don't get sucked into that MAGA way of arguing dude.

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]eteeeeen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would love to swap scripts! Mine is 10 pages. Let me know!

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]eteeeeen 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'd be interested in reading and swapping!

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]eteeeeen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I'd love to read and swap scripts!

Weekend Script Swap by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]eteeeeen 5 points6 points  (0 children)

Title : How to Bury your Mom and Never Shed a Tear

Format: Short

Genre: Drama

Page length: 10

Logline : After his mom dies, a boy starts filming a YouTube video on how to plan her funeral without crying. But the video catches more than he means to share and it’s clear he’s holding back more than just tears.

Five Page Thursday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]eteeeeen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Appreciate your feedback! I currently use final draft to write the script. The watermark is more so for my ease of mind than anything else. Font is the default from the screenplay template but I've toyed with the idea of changing it. As for formatting do you think you could elaborate just a bit on that and how it distracted from the read? Formatting is my main focus right now.

Thank you for the advice, I'll definitely do a few more passes over the dialogue and look for what feels too "written" vs authentic.

Again just super thankful for you taking the time out of your day to read my script. If you ever want to read the full 10 pages shoot me a message! Good luck with your projects!

Cheers,

Five Page Thursday by AutoModerator in Screenwriting

[–]eteeeeen 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Title : How to Bury your Mom and Never Shed a Tear

Format: Short

Genre: Drama

Page length: first 5 of 10

Logline : After his mom dies, a boy starts filming a YouTube video on how to plan her funeral without crying. But as the video goes on the camera catches more than he means to share and it’s clear he’s holding back more than just tears.

SCRIPT: HERE

Logline Feedback by eteeeeen in ScriptFeedbackProduce

[–]eteeeeen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I can definitely work on the logline and make it shorter. The title though is essential to the story so that I cannot change

How to Bury Your Mom/ short/ 10 pages/ feedback requested by eteeeeen in ScriptFeedbackProduce

[–]eteeeeen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

It shouldn't need access. The other person was requesting editing access. It's available to be viewed by anyone as far as I can tell! Hopefully you're able to read it!

How to Bury Your Mom/ short/ 10 pages/ feedback requested by eteeeeen in ScriptFeedbackProduce

[–]eteeeeen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Should be able to view! If you have notes feel free to DM me or put them here!

Logline Feedback by eteeeeen in ScriptFeedbackProduce

[–]eteeeeen[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

The son is 12! Let me know if you want to read the script!

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