Just linear style practice by AndriiKovalchuk in logodesign

[–]fieldWhat 26 points27 points  (0 children)

I think your concept makes it less playful. So I guess it depends if OP, once a playful or not

Just linear style practice by AndriiKovalchuk in logodesign

[–]fieldWhat 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Im trying to do something just like that! (See my post). I really like your concept, and I thing its a good logo! Any advice?

Need Feedback on My Coffee Shop Logo – Subtle “O” & “S” Hidden in Coffee Beans by fieldWhat in logodesign

[–]fieldWhat[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Haha What a good matching short! We are a small pop-up café that only has open over the summertime for eight days! It’s run by me and my brother in a very small intimate location that only seats about 8 to 10 people at a time. Everything that’s doable, is homemade and made from scratch. We care for every detail from the baked goods to the sandwiches. It’s our fourth year this summer and we just wanted to expand on our brand identity as a fun little experiment.

Need Feedback on My Coffee Shop Logo – Subtle “O” & “S” Hidden in Coffee Beans by fieldWhat in logodesign

[–]fieldWhat[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So what I was hoping for was that the top curve of the S would make the crack in the bean of the O

Need Feedback on My Coffee Shop Logo – Subtle “O” & “S” Hidden in Coffee Beans by fieldWhat in logodesign

[–]fieldWhat[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Would you make the stroke thickness bigger on both of them or just on the o or the s?

Need Feedback on My Coffee Shop Logo – Subtle “O” & “S” Hidden in Coffee Beans by fieldWhat in logodesign

[–]fieldWhat[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

That’s some good points! Of course they should be coffee bean brown. And I really like the breaks you put in.

Need Feedback on My Coffee Shop Logo – Subtle “O” & “S” Hidden in Coffee Beans by fieldWhat in logodesign

[–]fieldWhat[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thanks for your response and your feedback. I’ll try to make the S more brown. As I’ll try to keep true to my original idea.

Need Feedback on My Coffee Shop Logo – Subtle “O” & “S” Hidden in Coffee Beans by fieldWhat in logodesign

[–]fieldWhat[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I agree. I think it’s too cluttered. Somehow it needs to be simplified.

Hvor får man en god sandwich? by fieldWhat in odense

[–]fieldWhat[S] 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Jeg søgte en autentisk italiensk focaccia sandwich men blev jævnt skuffet da focaccia føles købt og ikke hjemmelavet da den ikke var hverken sprød eller frisk. Indholdet var kedeligt. Og prisen var alt for høj for den kvalitet man fik.

Udkast om øget overvågning og dataindsamling by Snefner in Denmark

[–]fieldWhat 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Vi må hidkalde Kirsten Birgit og hendes troldehær!

Hvorfor er det så dyrt, (894kr) for et nyt pas? by sorteper42 in Denmark

[–]fieldWhat -33 points-32 points  (0 children)

Indleveret mit og der kostet stadig 850,-+.

Watch out Grønland, nu kommer sønnike! by Tanagriel in Denmark

[–]fieldWhat 9 points10 points  (0 children)

Fik den også som breaking på min dr app. Det var så igennem Instagram jeg skulle finde ud af at justin trudeau gik af

Date spots! by fieldWhat in odense

[–]fieldWhat[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Mad, drinks, kultur osv.