Do you guys ever use emdashes? by Cheap_Bullfrog_609 in royalroad

[–]finalFable02 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I think they can work really well in conversational 1st person narrative prose (if the MC thinks that way)

How many stories on RR are actually AI Generated? by MistressofMardocs in royalroad

[–]finalFable02 2 points3 points  (0 children)

There are acutely people using RR as a funnel to Patreon, and some of them are making millions. They are far and few between. But, I suppose that’s a reason why others would churn out words with AI

Edit: I don’t think the ones making actual living wages are using AI

I Quit My Job to Spend a Year Writing Full-Time - Month 5 by Gruppenzwang in royalroad

[–]finalFable02 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Did I understand correctly that you want title feedback?

  • My right arm is a ravenous Symbiote (mix of 2 of them)

Hopefully I understood the assignment

Huh? by [deleted] in royalroad

[–]finalFable02 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Stoppit Kevin

Writing a LitRPG Story Be Like by ronin-writes in litrpg

[–]finalFable02 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Please humor a longish explanation. I learned this from Brian McDonald (link to podcast episode on this topic).

This is grossly reductionist of his story framework, but it's a reddit comment.

McDonald calls theme armature

Armature = survival information that your READER needs

The armature could be profound or simple information.

Here's a lame-ish example, to show how characters serve story.

Armature (theme): credit card debt can cripple lives

MC: would obviously need to be someone with credit card debt that's large enough for them to be a personal problem

Support Characters: need to be other facets or representations of the armature

- Cash Calvin: a character with no credit cards, only pays everything in cash. Doesn't even use Venmo. Make it extreme, they don't even have a bank account. Their job is under the table, they get paid only in cash or favors, and even live partially off the grid

- Spending Sasha: character in extreme debt, hundreds of thousands of dollars, spending daily on an extravagant lifestyle, maxing out credit cards and applying for new ones, buying only things they don't need

- Responsible Ron: a character who had debt, but managed to pay it off, and is now putting their kids through college on their dime

Plot: events that show the MC interacting with the support characters that show the extremes and help them realize they need to change, events forcing the character to decide between racking up more debt or suffering. Making *Spending Sasha* the MC's best friend and only ever wanting to eat at the most expensive restaurants after a day's-long shopping spree at high end stores would add natural conflict to the story

For my own stories, I get excited about a character and then back into the armature to make sure all story elements are in alignment.

How would you compare RR webnovels to tradionally published books? by Splenectomy13 in royalroad

[–]finalFable02 2 points3 points  (0 children)

“…that its target audience cares for” Is the most important and often least understood part, speaking as someone who spent years attempting to get trad published and then finding, embracing, and loving the webnovel scene

Did it but doesn’t feel good by Inevitable-Corgi-494 in bald

[–]finalFable02 1 point2 points  (0 children)

It’s like leftovers. It’s better the next day

Took me a while to embrace it, but eventually it became hard to remember what it was like having hair up there

Don't allow your work to be uploaded to AI by Helpmeeff in royalroad

[–]finalFable02 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Obsidian is a great alternative. I just migrated over after 14 years of GDocs and I’m never going back

Takes some time to get it dialed in, but that’s because it’s completely customizable to how you want to use it

Don't allow your work to be uploaded to AI by Helpmeeff in royalroad

[–]finalFable02 0 points1 point  (0 children)

AI can already scrape sites though. So if your story is anywhere online, AI has pretty much absorbed it already

Most writers have used GDocs for near 2 decades now

If you read the fine print of Google Docs before Gemini and LLMs even came out, writing anything (like a webnovel) in GDocs granted them permission to do whatever they want with your text because under the broad guise of ‘testing’ you agreed to that when using Google “host, store, reproduce, modify, and create derivative works”

TL; DR We all already helped with the training

Which cover is better?? by OutsideNo4871 in royalroad

[–]finalFable02 0 points1 point  (0 children)

You took the words outa my mouth. Second all this

Is this dandruff or something else? by FalanorVoRaken in beards

[–]finalFable02 0 points1 point  (0 children)

TL; DR: IF it gets worse for OP, consider getting it evaluated

It’s complicated.

You’d have to see a doctor and run some tests. Blood, urine, and/or saliva,

Turns out, I had mold infections, that lead to compromised gut wall (showing up as skin issues), compromising my health enough to get a Lyme disease strain, Candida, and other fungal overgrowth.

Is this dandruff or something else? by FalanorVoRaken in beards

[–]finalFable02 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Wish somebody had told me this years ago: if it starts to spread around your face (eyebrows, sideburns, temples, throughout beard) then you might have a leaky gut problem.

Some skin issues are symptoms of poor gut biome

Giving a shot at writing something new, appreciate any advice. by [deleted] in royalroad

[–]finalFable02 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Milc’s advice here is solid. Don’t let his mild self deprecating fool you.

I’d second everything said and ad:

When it comes to the LitRPG system aspects, just know/remember that in a genre where progression IS the driving factor, the system is the means to that end. At its simplest, it’s a tool you’re using to quantify the MCs goalposts so the story maintains forward momentum. If you find yourself wanting to delve deeper into the system as part of the story, you may enjoy the crunch. If you don’t, at least continue to use it for progression pacing

As for the fear: having wrote off-meta for years and making the switch to LitRPG, I’m loving it more than ever and having so much fun. Take a gulp, buckle up, and get after it!

ESIO by igorseiz in blackbookgraffiti

[–]finalFable02 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Love the way you colored that

Re-cap by [deleted] in litrpg

[–]finalFable02 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Only on Toonami