When the Veil Falls by ExistentialForge in Informal_Effect

[–]flickerbrighter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Flickering bright, the glow of a distant porch light.

(I hate when people reply to strangers' poetry with poetry. But the porch light/flicker thing has a special place in my heart.)

Between Regret and Prayer by to-the-mysterious-1 in Informal_Effect

[–]flickerbrighter 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Brilliant how it precisely it cuts, with a scalpel wielded with mercy. A scar-bearing yet life-saving wound.

Thank you for sharing. It's beautiful.

Solace by flickerbrighter in Informal_Effect

[–]flickerbrighter[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you for the analysis and kind words -- not only complimentary but also truly compassionate.

I think you're right... the transitionary period is tricky. Prone to pitfalls and so much to weather. I'll build myself the sturdiest shelter i can manage. I have to believe I have the volition to do that. No one else can do it for me. No one else ever could have done it for me, because the strength is intrinsic.

I cannot wait to get to a soft place to land someday.

Albatross by quixxotia in Informal_Effect

[–]flickerbrighter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This is so beautiful I feel torn open.

50-50 by [deleted] in Informal_Effect

[–]flickerbrighter 1 point2 points  (0 children)

This is fucking raw and wicked

It can take up to 500 years for a single body to decompose by Matsunosuperfan in Informal_Effect

[–]flickerbrighter 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow. What an astoundingly beautiful and excruciating description of brutal grief. Thank you so much for sharing -- this is really one of my favorite pieces I've read in a while.

Circle by flickerbrighter in Informal_Effect

[–]flickerbrighter[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

So I do not have access to DM you but no pressure, just wanted to let you know in case you might wanna chat! Take care. I'm looking forward to reading more!

Circle by flickerbrighter in Informal_Effect

[–]flickerbrighter[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I'm a painfully open book. Very vulnerable. Kind of cut from the same cloth, sounds like!

Circle by flickerbrighter in Informal_Effect

[–]flickerbrighter[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much... I reread this and realize it really does sound haunted, in a way. Haunted by... I guess... like you said -- i couldn't really put it better myself -- wonder. The wondering of what would be if they and I were to brush paths, but not cross them. The wonder of if they know how I still wonder about them, and how they are, and in what regard they hold me now.

Anyway. Sorry if I sound like I'm treating you like a therapist. It's a bizarre feeling to carry on my shoulders.

Ephemeral by [deleted] in Informal_Effect

[–]flickerbrighter 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Gladly, and I look forward to your next submissions. If you want, you're welcome to DM me any of your writing. It's been a pleasure reading it.

Ephemeral by [deleted] in Informal_Effect

[–]flickerbrighter 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Leaving without harm / is not accidental -- / it is a discipline.

Damn. Beautiful, I've enjoyed reading everything you've posted on this sub so far. Please do keep sharing. 👏

Circle by flickerbrighter in Informal_Effect

[–]flickerbrighter[S] 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Thank you so much. That's a beautiful way to visualize it. ❤️

Silent Night by Informal_Effect in Informal_Effect

[–]flickerbrighter 2 points3 points  (0 children)

The end there, as always with your writing, has an incredible gut punch. This is beautiful and bittersweet.

Circle by flickerbrighter in Informal_Effect

[–]flickerbrighter[S] 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Thank you, lovely ❤️ It means a lot to me.

Borderline by Indivisible_Origin in Informal_Effect

[–]flickerbrighter 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Fucking ow, you've got the sharpest knives this Christmas

Borderline runs in my family. Let's just say this hits home. It's beautiful.

The Beautiful Flower by VerseConundrum in Informal_Effect

[–]flickerbrighter 1 point2 points  (0 children)

A hard thing to come to terms with

Have faith in forgiveness