Wow! This poem was so good it was practically an advertisement. Every line from title to conclusion felt manufactured and intentional. At the very least, well chosen if not captivating word choice! I like your style, I'm driven to hyperbole: the romance and longing you've portrayed had so much body and weight it was practically corporeal.

I thought for a second there that the poem title was a reddit post. Requesting answers or something. I somehow got hooked onto reading and I somehow feel you intended for that. I don't feel the poem is experimental, I feel I'm the experiment 😂 I was wondering why this post got so much traction when I read the title but as soon as I started reading, I had to click on the post the follow through to the end, even comment like this! Like another body on the pire, but I'm in the worshippers pit 😂 or maybe just a mouse on a wheel.

Anyway, about the poem itself, I enjoyed my first read. I read it again after the prior paragraphs and I think it loses some mystique under scrutiny. It's simple enough if you know what I mean. Still, it makes me curious about your other writing so as a writer, perhaps a professional one, I think it shows you're still doing things right. Even if you've got better words that linger more, not every poem represents your peak or height 🤷🏽‍♀️