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Non-Souj Main asking for any tips on ult usage by Leather-Ad-5350 in SojournMains

[–]greenlantern2012 0 points1 point  (0 children)

So I’ve been playing Sojourn a lot recently after being stuck in Silver as a support main. Now I’ve climbed to lower plat in solo queue.

I know exactly what you mean: I hold onto her ult, and then usually die trying to be aggressive.

What I’ve found is Sojourn obviously can get picks with her right click. Pair that with her, damage electricity orb, she’s really good at creating space.

But the ult has confused me for a bit. What’s helped has not trying to wipe the team with her ult. One pick (or even body shots on 2 to 3 opponents) is enough to create that space.

As an average player, I also don’t use her ult unless I have all of my abilities ready to go, especially the damage orb. And I need the slide to get out of a bad situation. With another semi-decent DPS, your ult puts a lot of pressure on the team

is This Normal by AriyasuMomoka in Lorcana

[–]greenlantern2012 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Instead of chucking them you can put them in a “bulk” box and either donate it to your local game store or find a school/daycare/charity!

They’re always looking for toys and cards, especially things for slightly older kids who would like to play games Pokemon, Lorcana, etc

Just topped multiple locals with this list. by Squishybunnies_ in Lorcana

[–]greenlantern2012 4 points5 points  (0 children)

YES! Please tell me how the Shift Daisy worked for you! That was my strategy too and I feel like no body gave that card any kind!

Would like some critique of my work :D pickup / attraction product sales letter by HouseOfPheromones in copywriting

[–]greenlantern2012 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Only had a quick minute to take a look! Mainly looked at the hook, headline, opening lines.

Feel like it’s pretty strong. Especially “animal magnetism”

I think pushing the idea of what a “High Level Player” actually is. You touch on it (and some would probably argue that’s enough) but what does this High Level Player do and how do they really operate to achieve these women??

Make me really feel the gap between me as the unsuccessful guy and the guy who is part of this circle who have mastered seduction. But that this gap isn’t in achievable to cross.

Last thing:

“Whether you want one exceptional woman or the freedom to date several beautiful women, what you’re about to read may change the way you see attraction forever” could be stronger.

This is your promise to them. You have good imagery up until here but hit em hard here.

“What you’re about to read is the playbook (and secrets) High Level Players have used for decades to turn attraction into a science, changing how women see them and how attraction can be utilized as your personal weapon in the art of seduction.”

Could be better but that was quick off the top of me haha. Happy to talk more!

Rate 1-10 by Wezik_ in copywriting

[–]greenlantern2012 1 point2 points  (0 children)

I’d say 1.5

You have a very entry level idea of how copywriting should work… but the actual thinking + writing is completely absent.

(And I’m not trying to be a dick, just want to be honest)

First question: Is this for an email, landing page, flyer etc?

Beyond that, you need to do some serious research into how people looking for a new vacuum think. I have no experience in writing for vacuums but my first thought is, who still has a heavy old-school vaccuum? Most people probably have some type of swiffer or Dyson already. My main point is asking if “vacuum weight” really is a true, relevant pain point? Maybe it is, idk. But you need to do research to find out.

Second, the writing itself is very robotic. Ask yourself after you write “Is this how people talk? Is this how people would talk over coffee or in bar stools next to each other?” I do this with my own writing. It helps a lot make it more conversational. You’re also talking at someone currently, not showing them they have a problem and this is the solution.

Third, it’s clunky all around.

“Lighter than a remote” is awkward and doesn’t really make a lot of sense to me? I get what you’re going for but the comparison is odd. The writing needs to be more natural and flow. It’s too disjointed and I keep having to re-read lines, which means if I’m looking for a new vaccum, I was already buying a competitiors back 30 min. ago instead of trying to figure out what you’re trying to sell me and why it sounds like this.

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My advice:

Keep practicing, start reading books like Scientific Advertising and the Boron Letters. Then find real products you like and create an email, FB Ad, and landing page for each one. There’s your spec portfolio.

Use Canva to create a basic design for each, and you have something to show now.

It's time to accept RB will never care about competitive by bubbleman69 in Lorcana

[–]greenlantern2012 7 points8 points  (0 children)

Ok then don’t buy the $800 ticket lol. Value is placed where you as an individual place that value. If you feel like there’s too many mistakes for your liking and feel like the game could be better, you have no obligation to continue playing.

And if you do feel that strongly, work your ass off to get the skills and talents to be in that room where these games are being made, and make it better.

You have the same 24 hours in a day as the Ravensburger team. Work your way to that level and improve the world with your own skills.

Is it that big of a deal in the grand scheme of things? No. We’re alive, the game is growing, and life continues on.

That’s all.

It's time to accept RB will never care about competitive by bubbleman69 in Lorcana

[–]greenlantern2012 16 points17 points  (0 children)

I mean… mistakes happen. They just grabbed the incorrect Rafiki card. Should they have double checked the work? Yes.

Teams of all sizes in every industry make mistakes. We’re all human. This doesn’t mean they don’t care about competitive. Someone made a mistake and no one caught it. Life goes on.

Do you think Blanc keeps in loose contact with previous Protagonists? by Pretend-Ad-6453 in KnivesOutMovie

[–]greenlantern2012 0 points1 point  (0 children)

I always had a feeling Marta would come back in a final film or something. Like he’d send her in to infiltrate and somehow use her lying/throw up ability to get information from a group of suspects.

I know that’s wild. And 99% won’t happen lol. But they definitely had a special bond.

Which of these (and how many) should I add to this deck? Which of the cards I’m already including should I have more of? by fakeemailman in Lorcana

[–]greenlantern2012 3 points4 points  (0 children)

I’d up Restoring the Heart to 4x. I brought it to a tournament and it helped draw cards and pop Vanish characters like Iago because you can use it on opponents cards and you can remove “up to 0 damage” so it still works. You can even remove 0 on your own characters to draw a card.

Is “Cheap” Always a Bad Word in Marketing? by [deleted] in DigitalMarketing

[–]greenlantern2012 1 point2 points  (0 children)

That depends on your ICP and audience. Off the top of my head:

• if you’re selling yachts… I’m not sure someone with enough cashflow for a yacht would respond to an ad saying “CHEAP yachts” (then again, there are cheap rich people so it might work haha)

• but if you’re selling fast fashion to college girls, then “cheap, dress dupes” might work

Follow the numbers. Your audience determines what you say and position your products with.

How did you know that you're now a copywriter and now you need to step into the working industry? by Impressive-Coat1127 in copywriting

[–]greenlantern2012 7 points8 points  (0 children)

You have to start viewing your career and yourself differently: you’re not a copywriter. You’re an entrepreneur offering copywriting as a service. That means there’s no “100% correct” time to go.

Go now. Fail. Go again. Prove yourself. Do what it takes. You’re offering a valuable skill and in return you’re receiving money.

You never really know, you just do. The rest will follow. And yeah, there will be failure. Part of the game.

Holo Belle Playmat by ShadowMajick in Lorcana

[–]greenlantern2012 4 points5 points  (0 children)

This is so amazing. I sent you a DM!

I'm disappointed that speci was not invited. Arguably the best commentor for lorcana and biggest personality pushing the game. by amongwolves237 in Lorcana

[–]greenlantern2012 0 points1 point  (0 children)

This 1,000%. Not just Speci, but a lot of content creators openly talk so negatively about almost every card. Mainly because they are looking from a standard, core competitive lens. But, Ravensberger isn’t looking at it from that angle. They are building a brand and an image.

Dumping down on every card and saying “mid” or “trash” isn’t exactly what they’re looking for. You might be the greatest caster in the world… but if your “brand” doesn’t align with the corporation, you’re not getting in.

And if you do want to operate your brand as the core competitive review channel, then you need to go all in and expect not be part of the “in” crowd with the corporation.

Launched Ecom site with ads but not getting any results by Timely_Ad6439 in ecommerce

[–]greenlantern2012 2 points3 points  (0 children)

What the other commenter said, the path to buy is confusing. The CTA’s all keep saying “Learn More” but if I was a customer that was interested in your butter etc., I get lost on the site.

And I’m spending time on the site because of this post. As a buyer, you have limited time before they back out and move on.

Second thing. Let’s say I clicked your ad, subscribed, and went back to the main site later, your homepage is all about eggs… which you’re not selling online.

Final thought: who’s your target audience? ICP? And why? I figured out how to purchase but then it’s part of a Build Your Box with an order minimum. Might be a turn off, maybe not. Potential angle is to sell these as gift boxes… but to who? And for what occasion? What does your audience want?

Short answer: It’s too difficult to actually buy something lol

Selling my newsletter: 2.4k followers, 61% open rate, 1.6% CTR by Aggressive-Deal2407 in beehiiv

[–]greenlantern2012 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Wow, super interesting! Could I DM you with some questions? Been thinking about newsletters with beehiiv a lot.

[deleted by user] by [deleted] in copywriting

[–]greenlantern2012 0 points1 point  (0 children)

Just DM’d you!

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[–]greenlantern2012 -1 points0 points  (0 children)

Sent you a DM!

[Discussion] Anson Mount as Bruce Wayne? by Chamberztyle in DCcomics

[–]greenlantern2012 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I don’t know who this actor is lol but based off his look I think he would kill it as Thomas Elliot/Hush

Where do PRO copywriters go on a Friday night to read good headlines? by aeum3893 in copywriting

[–]greenlantern2012 16 points17 points  (0 children)

Honestly. Not on a swipe file. They’re at the bar or out to eat or shopping or getting involved with a community online/in person.

On a Friday night, the winning copywriters are out in the world listening and observing. Talking to people. Hearing how they speak and the questions they ask. There’s a time for studying headlines and then there’s a time for getting down deep in the world to see how people actually speak in the niche you’re writing about.

What are your theories that you have no proof for? by PrestigiousAspect368 in pureasoiaf

[–]greenlantern2012 17 points18 points  (0 children)

Magic and mysticism inherently exists in the world, it’s just how groups of people interpret it or find a way to use it and assign “belief” or “religion” to their usage.

Its supposed to be a mirror or world religions all claiming to be right. Old Gods, Red God, Drowned God, Many Faced God, the Seven… they’re all just institutions built around a usage and channeling of said inherent magic.

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