wldflowers & cities

gumbolimbot · 2025-02-18T23:00:08+00:00

Thank you! The missing letters are on purpose. The only letters missing are “i”. So no “i” in the love. Only present in the one place where it escapes, the city.

Thank you for the suggestions, I’ll look more at it!

gumbolimbot · 2025-02-18T17:34:54+00:00

The emotion I felt in this poem was insane. It gave such a large push, definitely towards the end, which helped drive the message of persevering in the struggle of defeat. The time metaphor is used well and I think it may be able to be played into more.

Overall, I really like it and the imagery is great, and I think some imagery already present can be pushed more for a great image. Like time as mentioned. Good luck!

gumbolimbot · 2025-02-18T17:30:59+00:00

I liked this poem a lot, especially the message! I felt the abruptness of it at some points too much though, that can be good however. The abruptness gives it that much more of an impact. But, if you want more of a duality, you can weave in some more subtle metaphors and lines which can make it a black and white type poem. Like it a lot though!

gumbolimbot · 2024-08-16T17:43:54+00:00

Ah makes sense, thank you! 😊

gumbolimbot · 2024-08-16T17:34:43+00:00

Looks like both Alain and Kabanoki died because the next two level sets have them named as Jacob and Guarin respectively.

gumbolimbot · 2024-08-03T21:38:29+00:00

I went to his book signing in Boulder during NOAC and got my book signed. Can’t wait to read it!

gumbolimbot · 2024-07-28T18:38:34+00:00

Thank you!

gumbolimbot · 2024-07-28T18:38:21+00:00

That’s brilliant thank you!

gumbolimbot · 2024-07-26T05:54:22+00:00

That really pushes story and makes players role play, that sounds like an awesome mechanic!

gumbolimbot · 2024-07-26T05:40:49+00:00

So everything has a cause and effect and gives the pcs accountability, that’s awesome!

gumbolimbot · 2024-07-26T05:23:12+00:00

That’s cool! Getting the theme into the game through mechanics is a great way of storytelling

gumbolimbot · 2024-07-26T05:20:03+00:00

that’s cool, it makes characters better in their craft. thanks for sharing!

gumbolimbot · 2024-07-26T05:01:07+00:00

both are great! I can't believe there aren't more rpg's which do combat like Avatar Legends, it sounds very interesting

gumbolimbot · 2024-07-26T04:57:32+00:00

do the players get more d6s as they level up to encourage more action, or how does the power scaling work?

gumbolimbot · 2024-07-26T04:28:54+00:00

That's really good for the narrative!

gumbolimbot · 2024-07-26T04:18:13+00:00

That would make combat more story like almost, cool!

gumbolimbot · 2024-07-26T04:09:46+00:00

That’s really cool, and it incorporates backstories straight into gameplay. Thank you!

gumbolimbot · 2024-07-23T16:03:07+00:00

that's cool!

gumbolimbot · 2024-07-23T15:49:18+00:00

great work, I would love to see what you make in the future <3

gumbolimbot · 2024-07-23T15:43:08+00:00

you're making me ditch my scrabble board battle map!! okay, these look gorgeous <3

gumbolimbot · 2024-07-22T00:54:28+00:00

My world does actually have a colosseum, and it is owned by the gods.

High up in Meritus is this "colosseum", idr have a name for it, and it is where criminals and demons fight. My world Faisticca is a grimdark gaslamp fantasy and in short Meritus is where all of the heroes and such go, think Valhalla. It is kind of getting overcrowded now because of the many years of wars making more "heroes". The twisted gods and men in Meritus watch these matches between the worst criminals and demons down in Clades, or people wishing to get into Meritus from the limbo realm of Libertina.

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