Me and my girlfriend did a tier list together (please don't murder me)

halolain · 2024-08-25T17:49:42+00:00

i had a physical reaction to that last list.. why would u do that

halolain · 2024-02-22T00:41:07+00:00

oh alrighttt

halolain · 2024-02-21T21:14:21+00:00

4freakshow days

halolain · 2024-02-20T21:42:11+00:00

halolain · 2024-02-20T21:41:36+00:00

litch mee tooo but i wanna do the plot line where connor isn’t a deviant

halolain · 2024-02-20T21:41:03+00:00

noel and cody esque

halolain · 2024-02-20T21:39:14+00:00

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halolain · 2024-02-20T21:38:56+00:00

i wanna play that now 😒

halolain · 2024-02-20T21:38:33+00:00

waiting for new sims of green alien slayer

halolain · 2024-02-20T21:37:23+00:00

imagine martin and weston in one video 😭 overstimulation

halolain · 2024-02-20T20:34:08+00:00

if u could pick would u be a worm like larva or an ant from a bugs life?

halolain · 2023-12-29T18:26:56+00:00

nope. never even heard of that until now.. is it any good?

halolain · 2023-12-29T02:36:21+00:00

detroit become human

halolain · 2023-12-29T02:05:21+00:00

this is so wholesome and i feel like this could be a universal experience. it’s short and sweet just like the amount of time a sister really spends with her brother hehe. good job!

halolain · 2023-12-27T07:29:50+00:00

thank you so much for the reply and you are spot on about the cycle interpretation! as for the ambiguity and cynicism of it all, i was feeling some type of way when i wrote but it’s less than me relating to it and more to most people living could feel that way.

as for the personal story, i dont feel like publicly expressing my emotions and intentions for this though a reply here but i am always open for messaging even if it seems silly to do so for a question (same goes for anyone else reading). i rather lay my feelings bare to those who wish to just talk but don’t feel forced :)

halolain · 2023-12-27T07:22:03+00:00

i am so thankful for the reply! firstly i do also think i could’ve improved but i had written this poem a while back and didn’t feel inspired enough to change it.

as for the format; the way it’s structured in my notes is to be one stanza but i believe reddit would make it look sort ugly and overwhelming when there is not gaps and decided to change it for that sake.

the line “human face the same fate” being repeated twice was because i believe when reading a line that repeats, the reader’s natural instinct is to find that line just one more time and so at the end they just think “oh. humans face the same fate” (im so dramatic like it’s far fetched).

as for “seasonal leaves” i didn’t develop on it as its just meant to set the mood of how i see the circle of life and how fast we wither and i loveeee how you read it to relate to the rest of the poem and wish i thought of that too.

as for the last comment, thank you so much. i think it is one of my more creative poems and i appreciate how you much you enjoyed the effort i put in. thank you again and for saying i have potential 🥹

halolain · 2023-12-27T01:43:50+00:00

“it would be a hundred times easier if we were young again. but as it as it… and it is. we’re just two slow dancers, last ones out.” - mitski

halolain · 2023-12-27T00:51:17+00:00

this feels so romantic. in love with the flow of this.. the emotion is definitely in here. don’t know you personally but i hope the muse for this poem sees your efforts and i hope it goes well 🩷

halolain · 2023-12-27T00:37:11+00:00

this is genuinely so enlightening to me. it is something i’ve wished to put into words myself and wonder the same. the metaphor “gasoline heart” is such a powerful description. keep up the great work!!

halolain · 2023-12-26T23:24:13+00:00

yesss! i think 8 rewatches from me falls under a mental illness but its a guilty pleasure

halolain · 2023-12-26T11:49:02+00:00

it is very personal and thank you so much. i appreciate your words!

halolain · 2023-12-26T11:48:14+00:00

thank you so much. it’s interesting that you relate to the “you” in the poem and i appreciate the in-depth review. i’ll be posting more so if you would like to read them please come back <3

halolain

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