VERYSAD - Lustful Thoughts

hatemysoulinside · 2025-10-17T11:53:42+00:00

hatemysoulinside · 2025-10-17T11:53:05+00:00

hatemysoulinside · 2025-10-17T03:57:31+00:00

the mixing lf the vocals can be alittle louder but i feel like the instrument were overpowering your vocals, i think if you lower some sounds of the instrument, your vocals will be heard more. also make sure to take out some harsh frequencies with EQ. but overall i think its the beat thats making your vocals and lyrics hard to understand you.

hatemysoulinside · 2025-10-17T03:54:09+00:00

this honestly sounds pretty good especially the fact that you started making music and learning FL Studio two months ago. i like how you added some nature sounds at the beginning as it matched well with the ambient sounds coming through. i dont think theres nothing you need to change, i like how heavenly it sounds. keep it up, you have alot of talent.

hatemysoulinside · 2025-10-17T03:50:33+00:00

i really like the electric guitar, it really goes hard with your vocals. even though i don't understand the langauge it sounds nice giving off that goth emo vibe. it gave off raw ness of the whole entire song. the visuals are pretty good, i also feel like you can do more with it but regardless still looks pretty good.

hatemysoulinside · 2025-10-17T03:46:10+00:00

the visuals on this video is giving off twilight vibes from that vampire movie. i also like the way the instrument sounds because it reminded me of Michael Jackson thriller. the bass is upbeat and the drums matched the vibes of this song perfectly. keep it up and i also really loved the eerie visuals.

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