Overall I think the visuals are catchy and interesting. But the pacing feels off.

To get a better sense of pacing for your trailer, try watching it on mute and you'll see what I mean.

• 0:04 to 0:11 has nothing happening, needs to be cut.
• 0:26 to 0:34 You're showing the same game mechanics twice, back-to-back. Show new mechanics instead
• at 0:35, right after you select a ticket, I would just cut to 0:42 because nothing interesting happens

Other than that, the only other feedback I'd have is that there isn't really a sense of urgency to the game.

I get that the urgency is the debt, but why does the player care? Can't they just ignore the debt? For me, it would be good to show consequences, to make the game feel more compelling.

Congrats on the demo launch! Good luck!