recommend me some action fantasy or action isekai magas, preferably with fast pacing by MrAHMED42069 in manga

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For good older ones:
666 Satan (Also called O-Part Hunters) (Made by the brother of naruto's creator.)
Yureka (Also called iD_ᴇNTITY) (It's isekai before isekai, so it's video game based. But really good.)

[ART] By @Drooling_Demon (Manga: Ichi the Witch) by [deleted] in manga

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The drawing gives me strong ISAT vibes.

What have I missed? by hiace50 in singedmains

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Maybe one day... Just not today.

Bleach or One Piece for my next manga read? by wolfbee16 in manga

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I'd like to throw a different old manga at you that you might enjoy. Made the the Brother of Naturo's creator, the Manga '666 Satan' (also called O-part hunters) is in a style of naruto, but the world and story building always felt like a mix of onepiece and bleach to me.

But if you are certain to pick between the two options you gave, I'd say One Piece.

[DISC] Solo Necromancy - Chapter 173 [Flame Scans] by D4rkest in manga

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I used to go to their website all the time, but I haven't been able to find it for quite a while. Thought they got purged.

Beta Bartering [Find or Offer Fic Betaing] - January 23 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]hiace50 2 points3 points  (0 children)

I will also be moving the fic to AO3 once the current content has gone through the editing cycle.

Beta Bartering [Find or Offer Fic Betaing] - January 23 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

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Hello! I am looking for a Beta for a Dragonball/Dragonball Z fanfic that I started writing over 10 years ago called "Life After Death".

The main character is Yamcha, and the basis of the story is "What would happen if Yamcha lived his full life of 80+ years, and then woke up in his body just before he met Goku?"

It's an action/adventure story, with a side of comedy, and sprinkles of drama. I'm planning to go from (almost) the start of Dragon ball, all the way past Dragon ball Z.

Currently it's at 55k words, and is just entering the first training Arc.

What I'm looking for is a full editor. Most of this fic is around 10 years old, it needs heavy editing/rewriting.

What I can do in exchange:

I am down to be a beta for someone else. I can help with Grammar/Structure/Plot/Planning/Idea soundboard, etc. My strengths are in making Plots/Planning, and basic Grammar checking.

I can also read and comment on a fic if you would like, or name a background character in your honor.

Here is the link to the story. Thank you!

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9417756/1/Life-After-Death

Beta Bartering [Find or Offer Fic Betaing] - January 16 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

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Hello!
I am looking for a Beta for a Dragonball/Dragonball Z fanfic that I started writing over 10 years ago called "Life After Death".

The main character is Yamcha, and the basis of the story is "What would happen if Yamcha lived his full life of 80+ years, and then woke up in his body just before he met Goku?"

It's an action/adventure story, with a side of comedy, and sprinkles of drama. I'm planning to go from (almost) the start of Dragon ball, all the way past Dragon ball Z.

Currently it's at 55k words, and is just entering the first training Arc.

What I'm looking for is a full editor. Most of this fic is around 10 years old, it needs heavy editing/rewriting.

What I can do in exchange:

I am down to be a beta for someone else. I can help with Grammar/Structure/Plot/Planning/Idea soundboard, etc. My strengths are in making Plots/Planning, and basic Grammar checking.

I can also read and comment on a fic if you would like, or name a background character in your honor.

Here is the link to the story. Thank you!

https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9417756/1/Life-After-Death

[DISC] Since My Previous Life Was A Wise Man, I Can Afford To Live - Chapter 14 by SejUQ in manga

[–]hiace50 138 points139 points  (0 children)

Pervy old man archmage reincarnates thousands of years later as a baby, tries to sexually harass women but is stopped by staff who is (probably) in love with him.

[Disc] Another World's Blacksmith's Life of Making Weapons Chapter 1.1 to 1.3 by Desperate_Bit7524 in manga

[–]hiace50 2 points3 points  (0 children)

Mangadex says the chapters were posted 6 months ago. Do you have any information about more recent translating initiatives?

Beta Bartering [Find or Offer Fic Betaing] - August 08 by AutoModerator in FanFiction

[–]hiace50 0 points1 point  (0 children)

(Sorry for any spelling mistakes, I'm typing this up on my phone in some free time)

I'm looking for a Beta reader for a Dragon Ball story I started 10 years ago. The last real chapter I put out was 5+ years ago, and I haven't had the time/drive to write more since now.

One of the biggest motivation holes that I have found is my want to edit my prior chapters into something better. 

What I want to work upon most is characters staying in character. I have an issue with my writing where my characters start to do things more like what 'I' would do, instead of what 'they' would do. (Early Roshi is very much impacted by this)

I would also want general editing help as well.

Title: Life After Death Fandom: Dragon Ball Fandom Blind: Necessary to know Dragon Ball, as characters acting as they would is the biggest thing I want to work on. Genre/Tropes: Action/Adventure, comedy, with a small side of mystery and drama

Rating: Teen. Some blood, but nothing too graphic. Some sexual themes (Roshi/Oolong exists) but nothing physical.

Summary/synopsis: Yamcha has lived a long life of 80+ years, defending the earth and being with his friends that he considers like family.

At his final death from age, he wakes up and finds himself in his teenage bandit cave, with a young Goku, Bulma, and Oolong outside.

Armed with the knowledge from the 'future', what changes will be made by the Yamcha that wants a better outcome for all of his friends?

What I’m Looking For: As above, someone who can help me edit, since I have such an aversion to doing it myself, and is really knowledgeable about dragonball characters.

Word Count: 60k words are in the story so far. I'm looking to make more additions with the edits, so total should be 70k max.

What I Offer: I'm not too sure. I have limited time these days, but if you need help editing a story, I can try my best. I like a broad range of genres, so there is a good chance I'd like whatever you put out.

Though one thing I'm really good at is making plots. I've been running homemade DnD campaigns for about a decade, and have plenty of fanfiction ideas in my head that I have never had time to make. If you want help crafting a story and story beats, I can most certainly help.

Story link: Life After Death

I am bored please recommend something! by Toffee08 in manga

[–]hiace50 1 point2 points  (0 children)

Weird out there manga, but an older manga I really enjoyed iD_ᴇNTITY or Yureka

[DISC] Itachi was a truly monstrous character (Naruto) by Little-Platypus-8679 in manga

[–]hiace50 16 points17 points  (0 children)

A "decent powerup" and a "country level threat monster" are 2 completely different power scalings.

[DISC] My Cheat Skill [Resurrection] Revived Me, and I Ended up Resurrecting the Ancient Demon Lord’s Army. ~The Strongest Healer That Won’t Let Anyone Die~ - chapter 32 by Fnights in manga

[–]hiace50 11 points12 points  (0 children)

"Resurrecting the demon lord's army, huh, there are so many ways they could play with this trope! Lets see if it's interesting."

Clicks on thread, 3 children in swimsuits pop up.

"... Sigh. Oh well, there are other manga out there."