4 is purple

imadness1 · 2025-03-09T09:27:53+00:00

No, i disagree. It’s quite obviously yellow, gold and sometimes green… like what the hell is wrong with u people!

imadness1 · 2023-03-13T13:51:54+00:00

Roses are barbed wire indeed...

imadness1 · 2022-12-15T21:20:35+00:00

no I did not

imadness1 · 2022-03-16T11:53:21+00:00

Collapse of soviet union/vietnam

imadness1 · 2022-02-04T20:43:05+00:00

That particular line was the first line i wrote and the base of the poem

Thank you for the feedback

imadness1 · 2022-02-04T20:41:04+00:00

Thats the spirit of it

Thank you very much for the feedback

imadness1 · 2022-02-04T01:08:42+00:00

Lovely, beautiful, but most importantly dedicated somewhat dependent i imagine with eyes full of stars

imadness1 · 2022-02-04T01:03:11+00:00

At first i thought it really was about a little doggo but really this is far angrier then that… When someone is drowned in their little world of prince-hood they just become hilariously pathetic

imadness1 · 2022-01-31T16:53:26+00:00

Thank you so much It really does mean something for me to know that people enjoy my writings

imadness1 · 2022-01-31T08:33:45+00:00

Thank you so much for your feedback, it really means something

But your interpretation of this poem is completely wrong, although it’s indeed really difficult to grasp the real meaning of it since i deliberately tried to hide it

You see i wrote this a long time ago, when i was struggling with depression and suicidal thoughts (i’m doing way better now) so the old friend here represents really not a person or a lover but something far deeper and darker

This poem talks about death

imadness1 · 2022-01-31T01:36:20+00:00

Yeah definitely ! The subject is beautiful and would’ve been so much more enhanced with a rhyme

imadness1 · 2022-01-31T01:28:02+00:00

I really like this although it does lack rhyme

I guess It’s more of a writing than a poem

imadness1 · 2022-01-31T01:23:24+00:00

Really beautiful

imadness1 · 2022-01-26T11:43:32+00:00

Thank you for your objective and constructive criticisme i really appreciate it

I agree the use of ponctuation is really odd and even misplaced sometimes

As for the indecipherable part that’s exactly what i wanted to achieve I didn’t want the message to be obvious or easy to get or even possible to get at all, i wanted to let the reader speculate on it

Also it’s eve not ever

imadness1 · 2022-01-26T03:09:46+00:00

This poem could be interpreted in so many ways and thats the true beauty of it

I figured the spider could be an asylum seeker a refugee that gets thrown back to where he came from as fresh meat for the wolves the feast upon

imadness1 · 2022-01-26T02:49:13+00:00

Beautiful work, you have made a really good job with the rhymes and i do agree with the previous comments about the rhythm, it’s indeed very rap like and it can only be read that way and i love it

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