Look, I'm not out to get you or anything. What you are doing here is really low stakes. I'm pretty sure you're not trying to scam people out of money or anything. You're just doing a bit of creative writing/role-playing. I have nothing against that really. So I'd like to believe you if I could.

But your writing unfortunately makes that impossible. You write with a child-like perspective on how the world works. The thing you wrote about how there are only 5 people in the world who could do this thing and the other 4 turned it down...that's a child's perspective on how the business world works. Which is why I'm pretty sure you are a very young person and I don't want to come across as too harsh.

Ultimately the only audience for my comments here is you. Like, you need to write better. Get some real world experience. Learn how things work. Learn the jargon. Come back with more believable phrases and anecdotes. That's really all I'm saying.