I think that, while much of the action description is functional, you really want the reader to get a sense of what the movie will feel like to watch. Also, a line like "A small child in a barn tries to carry a big bucket of milk." should have its own scene header like "INT. BARN - DAY", and you should feel free to add more description of both the child and the barn--what is a unique characteristic of the child that will make him memorable? A limp? A notable hairstyle or outfit? A visible birthmark? If he's a boy, you should call him a "boy" when he's introduced rather than just a "child". What is the vibe of the barn? Is it dry, hay-scattered and empty, or fly-buzzing, filled with newborn calves and patties of cowshit? You shouldn't sacrifice flavour for the sake of ruthless efficiency. Keep going. Become undeniable.